Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和发音错误，且表达不够连贯，建议加强基础语法和词汇的学习，注意发音准确性，同时回答时要简洁明了，避免重复。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces my stress. It is a great way to escape from daily chores and refresh my mind.

提案: 回答中断断续续，表达不完整，建议练习完整句子的表达，避免语句中断，同时注意词汇的正确使用。

例: No, I haven't received any professional training in singing. I just sing for fun as an amateur, not professionally.

提案: 回答中多处语法错误和词汇使用错误，表达不清晰，建议加强句子结构练习，使用正确的词汇表达自己的想法。

例: To be honest, I usually sing for myself. I don't have a specific person to sing for. Singing is just a way for me to have fun and feel happy.

提案: 回答较为简短且断断续续，建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，并适当扩展内容，使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music has a magical power to make us feel cheerful, happy, and even euphoric.

× Yes, I like seeing because I think thing is a very helpful way to help me feel. Relaxed and less stressed and I think is a very great escape. ISM to escape from the chores. In our daily lives.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing is a very helpful way to help me feel relaxed and less stressed, and I think it is a great escape from the chores in our daily lives.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。原句中用错了“seeing”，应改为“singing”。另外，句子中缺少主语“it”，需要补充。

× No, actually I haven't. I haven't received any professional training in singing. I just. Although I think I'm interesting thing sounds but. Uhm. I'm just a a amateur. Not a professional?

✓ No, actually I haven't. I haven't received any professional training in singing. Although I think I'm interested in singing sounds, I'm just an amateur, not a professional.

这里“interesting thing sounds”用法错误，应为“interested in singing sounds”，因为“interested”是形容词，后面接介词短语。

× To be honest, I just want to see for myself. I don't have some. That is that I particularly want to seem 4. I think seeing for myself means. I just seen for fun. I seem to make myself relaxed and happy.

✓ To be honest, I just want to sing for myself. I don't have anyone that I particularly want to sing for. I think singing for myself means I just sing for fun. I sing to make myself relaxed and happy.

原句中“see”应为“sing”，动词用错了。还有“some”用法不当，应为“anyone”。“seem 4”应为“sing for”。“seen”应为“sing”。“seem”应为“sing”。这些都是代词和动词使用错误。

× Yes, singing is a form of music. Uh. Music has. A magical. Power to make people. Feel cheerful, happy and. Euphoric.

✓ Yes, singing is a form of music. Music has a magical power to make people feel cheerful, happy, and euphoric.

原句中断句不当，影响语义连贯，应合并句子使其通顺。

× Yes, I like seeing because I think thing is a very helpful way to help me feel. Relaxed and less stressed and I think is a very great escape. ISM to escape from the chores. In our daily lives.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing is a very helpful way to help me feel relaxed and less stressed, and I think it is a great escape from the chores in our daily lives.

原句断句不合理，导致句子结构混乱，应调整句子结构，使其完整且连贯。