Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise reason why you don't like singing, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural.

例: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good. When I sing, I feel uncomfortable and loud, so I prefer not to sing.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has many grammar mistakes. Please try to answer directly and clearly, explaining your confidence level and experience with singing lessons, using proper linking words.

例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not confident in my singing ability and I have never taken any lessons.

提案: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammar errors. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about why you want to sing for your family and friends.

例: I want to sing for my family and close friends because singing for them feels more personal and makes me happy.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Please try to express your opinion clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I am feeling sad, singing helps me feel better and more positive.

× No, I don't like singing because I don't have a really good boys so.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I don't have a really good voice.

The word 'boys' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'voice', which is singular. Using 'boys' is a singular and plural issue because it does not fit the context of singing. The correct singular noun 'voice' should be used.

× When I'm singing at the moment, I my voice is so loud and yeah.

✓ When I'm singing at the moment, my voice is so loud.

The sentence has an extra pronoun 'I' which causes sentence structure errors. Removing the extra 'I' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× No, I don't know really learned how to sing becauses I'm not very really confer confident or at my own ways so.

✓ No, I haven't really learned how to sing because I'm not very confident in my own way.

The phrase 'don't know really learned' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'haven't really learned'. Also, 'confer confident' is a misuse; it should be 'confident'. The preposition 'in' fits better than 'at' for 'confident in my own way'.

× No, I don't know really learned how to sing becauses I'm not very really confer confident or at my own ways so.

✓ No, I haven't really learned how to sing because I'm not very confident in my own way.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'confident'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'ways' should be singular 'way' to match the context.

× I want to sing for my family. And close friend's singing for them feels more inner.

✓ I want to sing for my family. And close friends' singing for them feels more sincere.

'Friend's' is singular possessive but should be plural possessive 'friends'' because it refers to multiple close friends. Also, 'inner' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'sincere'.

× And close friend's singing for them feels more inner.

✓ And close friends' singing for them feels more sincere.

The word 'inner' is an incorrect adjective here; 'sincere' is the correct adjective to express genuine feeling.

× Sitting there in Anesti for cost and make me happy.

✓ Sitting there and singing for them makes me happy.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrasing to 'Sitting there and singing for them makes me happy' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× Yes, I think uh, singing can't bring happiness to people be 'cause when I'm in a. Vet mode at the moment and I feel not happy so.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I'm in a bad mood, I feel unhappy.

The modal verb 'can't' is incorrect here; the student means 'can'. Also, 'be 'cause' should be 'because'. 'Vet mode' is likely a mispronunciation of 'bad mood'. The sentence is corrected for modal verb usage and clarity.

× Dad people. Sing Dad Movement.

✓ Dad people sing dad movement.

This sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing or miswriting. Without more context, it is difficult to correct fully. Possibly, the student meant 'Bad people sing bad movement' or similar. However, as it stands, it is a sentence structure error.