Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态混乱，且表达不够自然。建议使用简单现在时表达习惯性动作，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误（say应为sing），句子结构不够清晰。建议直接回答并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing at Palm Ridge School during music lessons with my teacher.

提案: 回答中多处词汇错误（say应为sing），表达不流畅。建议用简单句表达自己的想法，并说明原因。

例: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel shy singing in front of others, and I enjoy singing alone.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误（seeing him应为singing），且表达不够连贯。建议使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because the cheerful melodies help them relax and enjoy the music.

× I like singing because I feel relaxed when I was when I am singing.

✓ I like singing because I feel relaxed when I am singing.

句子中时态混用，前半句是现在时，后半句不应使用过去时“was”，应统一使用现在时“am singing”。

× I learned how to say when I was in Palm Ridge School.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was in Palm Ridge School.

句中“say”应为“sing”，且时态“learned”和“was”使用正确，无需改动。

× My teacher in the music lesson taught me how to sing.

✓ My teacher in the music class taught me how to sing.

“music lesson”通常表达为“music class”，更符合英语习惯。

× I do want to say for myself, because I'm not good saying in front of everybody and I like to say along.

✓ I do want to sing for myself, because I'm not good at singing in front of everybody and I like to sing along.

“say”应改为“sing”，且“not good saying”应为“not good at singing”，动词后需加介词“at”，表达正确。

× I agree that seeing him bring happiness to people because, uh, in the happy melodies of the song, people can be relaxed, Ann.

✓ I agree that singing can bring happiness to people because, uh, in the happy melodies of the song, people can be relaxed, and enjoy the music.

“seeing him”应为“singing”，且“Ann”应为“and”，是连词，原句拼写错误。