Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự liền mạch và rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý. Ngoài ra, tránh các từ không rõ nghĩa hoặc sai ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel tired after a long day. Singing comforts me and lifts my mood, making me feel better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn ngắn gọn và đúng trọng tâm, tuy nhiên bạn có thể mở rộng thêm một chút để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ như giải thích lý do hoặc cảm nhận của bạn về việc học hát.

例: No, I haven't learnt how to sing formally, but I enjoy singing casually at home.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I want to sing for my mother because it is a special way to show my gratitude for everything she has done. I believe it will make her feel appreciated and strengthen the bond between us.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung phù hợp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, tránh lỗi sai và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, I often sing when I am tired after a long day because it helps me relax and improves my mood. Singing allows me to express my emotions and feel more positive.

× I prefer singing because. When I feel tired. Singing helped me. Relax, Ana. Comfort table.

✓ I prefer singing because when I feel tired, singing helps me relax and feel comfortable.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. They should be combined into a complete sentence with correct punctuation and word order to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Singing helped me.

✓ Singing helps me.

The sentence refers to a habitual action or general truth, so the present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'helped'.

× Relax, Ana.

✓ relax and feel comfortable.

'Ana' seems to be a misheard or incorrect word here. The sentence should use appropriate verbs and objects to express the intended meaning without incorrect pronouns.

× Comfort table.

✓ feel comfortable.

'Comfort table' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'feel comfortable' to express the intended meaning.

× I want to sing for my mother because singing is a special way for me to express my. Gratitude for everything she has done, it would make her feel appreciated, a lover and I believe it will have sent in the born between us by showing how much I care.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because singing is a special way for me to express my gratitude for everything she has done. It would make her feel appreciated and loved, and I believe it will strengthen the bond between us by showing how much I care.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'a lover' and 'sent in the born'. It needs to be restructured into clear, complete sentences with correct word choice to convey the intended meaning.

× a lover

✓ and loved

The phrase 'a lover' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'loved' to describe how the mother would feel.

× I believe it will have sent in the born between us

✓ I believe it will strengthen the bond between us

The phrase 'sent in the born' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'strengthen the bond' to express the intended meaning.

× For example, I often singing whenever you tired after a long day because it helps me to relax and lift my mood.

✓ For example, I often sing whenever I am tired after a long day because it helps me to relax and lift my mood.

The verb 'singing' should be in base form 'sing' after 'often'. Also, 'you tired' should be 'I am tired' to match the subject and tense.

× whenever you tired

✓ whenever I am tired

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to refer to the speaker. Also, the verb needs to be in present tense with 'am'.

× Saying I love me too expressed my emotions and feel more positive.

✓ Singing 'I love me' also expresses my emotions and makes me feel more positive.

The sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Saying I love me too' should be 'Singing 'I love me' also', and verb forms should agree with the subject.