Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“really loud to sing”应为“I really like singing”。建议注意动词和形容词的正确使用，避免语法错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and creates a pleasant atmosphere. Although I'm not very good at it, I sing every day to improve my mood.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“learned about how to sing”应为“learned how to sing”，且“special thing apps”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复和错误。

例: No, I haven't taken singing classes, but I have been learning by myself using a special app on my phone. I use the app every day, and it helps me identify pronunciation mistakes and suggests ways to improve.

提案: 回答中多处用词错误，如“thing”应为“singing”，“scene”应为“singing”，“hapiness”拼写错误。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构，表达更清晰。

例: I want to sing for myself because singing is a way to express my feelings and relieve stress. Singing for myself brings me a lot of happiness and is very enjoyable.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，如“blew seeing”应为“I believe singing”，“forgot stand memories”表达不清。建议多练习句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to most people. When people sing, they often forget their worries and relieve their emotions. It is also an effective way to reduce stress and create a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, I really loud to sing because the thing kinda makes me more relaxed and provide me a pleasant atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I really like to sing because it kind of makes me more relaxed and provides me a pleasant atmosphere.

原句中“really loud to sing”不符合语法，应为“really like to sing”。此外，“provide”应与主语“thing”保持一致，改为“provides”。建议注意动词搭配和主谓一致。

× Although I'm not very good at it, I still seeing every day to improve my happiness.

✓ Although I'm not very good at it, I still sing every day to improve my happiness.

“still seeing”用法错误，应使用动词原形“sing”表示习惯性动作。建议区分动词的正确形式。

× No, I haven't learned about how to sing in the class, but I have learned about how to sing by myself on a special thing apps on my phone.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing in class, but I have learned how to sing by myself using a special app on my phone.

“learned about how to sing”表达不准确，应为“learned how to sing”。“thing apps”应为“app”。建议简化表达，注意介词使用。

× I use the app to seeing every day and the map can also gives me some mistakes of my pronunciation and how I would improve about it.

✓ I use the app to sing every day and the app also gives me feedback on my pronunciation and how I can improve it.

“to seeing”应为“to sing”，动词不定式后接动词原形。原句“map”应为“app”，且“gives”与主语“app”一致。建议注意动词形式和词汇准确性。

× Well, I believe you, I want to sing for myself because thing is a way to express my feelings and emotions and it's called also relieve my own stress.

✓ Well, I believe you. I want to sing for myself because singing is a way to express my feelings and emotions and it also helps relieve my own stress.

“thing”用词不当，应为“singing”。“it's called also relieve”结构错误，应改为“it also helps relieve”。建议注意词汇选择和句子结构。

× So I believe that scene for myself can bring me lots of hapiness and I think seeing for myself is the most pleasant for me.

✓ So I believe that singing for myself can bring me lots of happiness and I think singing for myself is the most pleasant for me.

“scene”应为“singing”，“seeing”应为“singing”，动词形式错误。建议注意拼写和动词形式。

× Yes I blew seeing can definitely bring happiness to most people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to most people.

“blew seeing”拼写错误，应为“I believe singing”。建议注意拼写和动词形式。

× When people are saying they often forgot stand memories and relieve their emotions and it's also effective way to reduce stress and brings joyful atmosphere.

✓ When people sing, they often forget sad memories and relieve their emotions. It's also an effective way to reduce stress and bring a joyful atmosphere.

“are saying”应为“sing”，“forgot stand memories”应为“forget sad memories”。“brings”应与主语“way”一致，改为“bring”。建议注意动词时态和词汇选择。