Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should answer the question directly instead of repeating or changing the question. For example, say 'Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.' Avoid adding unrelated words like 'fly'.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and enjoy music.

提案: You need to answer the question instead of repeating it. In English (Cambodia), try to give a clear response such as 'Yes, I have taken singing lessons before to improve my voice.' This shows you understand the question and can provide relevant information.

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing through classes and practice at home.

提案: Avoid repeating the question. Instead, answer directly. For example, 'I want to sing for my family because they support me.' This makes your answer natural and relevant in English (Cambodia).

例: I want to sing for my friends and family to share my happiness with them.

提案: Don't repeat the question. Answer it clearly, for example, 'Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and enjoy themselves.' This shows understanding and effective communication in English (Cambodia).

例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness as it allows people to express emotions and feel joyful.

× Do you like singing fly?

✓ Do you like singing?

The sentence 'Do you like singing fly?' has an incorrect word order and an unnecessary word 'fly'. The correct sentence should be 'Do you like singing?' to properly ask about the preference for singing. In English, the verb 'like' is followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) without additional unrelated words.

× Have you ever learned how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learnt how to sing?

The question uses the present perfect tense 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?'. Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are past participles of 'learn', but 'learnt' is more common in British English, which fits the context better. The original question is correct, but since the student repeated the examiner's question, no correction is needed here.

× Sing for Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

The sentence 'Sing for Who do you want to sing for?' is a jumbled structure combining a command and a question improperly. The correct form is 'Who do you want to sing for?' which is a clear and grammatically correct question. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily and maintain proper question word order.