Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强基础词汇和句型的掌握，避免拼写错误，如"seeing"应为"singing"，"rings"应为"lyrics"。同时，回答应更简洁，避免重复。

例: I don't like singing because my voice is not good and I can't remember the lyrics without looking at the screen. However, I enjoy listening to songs and other people singing.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如时态和冠词使用不当。建议注意时态一致性和冠词的正确使用，同时句子结构应更自然流畅。

例: I haven't learned to sing properly, but I sometimes follow my sister, who sings better than me. She teaches me how to sing popular songs.

提案: 回答中断句不自然，且有词汇错误，如"seeing the song"应为"singing the song"。建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To be honest, I don't want to sing for anyone because I don't like singing in public. Even with my family, I feel a bit unconfident about singing, so I prefer not to sing for others.

提案: 回答中存在拼写和语法错误，如"thing"应为"singing"，"joy's"应为"joy"，"seeing"应为"listening to"。建议使用正确词汇并丰富细节，使表达更准确。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring a lot of joy to people. For example, listening to rock music can energize people who feel upset, while country music can make people feel more relaxed.

× I don't like seeing because my Tom.

✓ I don't like singing because of my tone.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且'tom'应为'tone'，但根据语境推测是指唱歌的音调。'seeing'是动名词，意思是'看见'，与句意不符。

× I don't like seeing because my Tom.

✓ I don't like singing because of my tone.

缺少介词'of'，正确表达应为'because of my tone'，表示原因。

× It's not so good and I cannot follow the rings.

✓ It's not so good and I cannot follow the lyrics.

'rings'应为'lyrics'，歌词的意思，原词拼写错误。

× Sometimes I cannot remember the lyrics if I don't see the screens.

✓ Sometimes I cannot remember the lyrics if I don't see the screen.

'screens'应为单数'screen'，因为通常指一个屏幕。

× But I like to listen to the songs and listen to other people singing.

✓ But I like to listen to songs and listen to other people singing.

'the songs'改为'songs'更自然，表示一般的歌曲。

× I haven't learned how to sing a song exactly.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing a song exactly.

此句无语法错误，符合现在完成时用法。

× But I will follow my sister who can sing well better than me.

✓ But I will follow my sister who can sing better than me.

'well better'重复，应该只用'better'，表示比较级。

× She sometimes can teach me how to sing a popular songs.

✓ She sometimes can teach me how to sing a popular song.

'a'后面应接单数名词，'songs'应改为'song'。

× To be honest.

✓ To be honest,

此句为不完整句，应加逗号与后文连接。

× I don't want to sing for anyone else because I don't like to sing to the public.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone else because I don't like to sing in public.

'sing to the public'不自然，正确表达是'sing in public'，表示在公众场合唱歌。

× I'm a bit not so confident about seeing the song so I think I won't sing for anyone.

✓ I'm a bit not so confident about singing the song so I think I won't sing for anyone.

'seeing the song'应为'singing the song'，动名词形式表示唱歌。

× Yes I think thing can bring a lot of joy's for people such as seeing the rock music can pump some upset peoples up an seeing country music can let people feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring a lot of joy to people, such as singing rock music can pump some upset people up and singing country music can let people feel more comfortable.

'thing'应为'singing'，'joy's'应为'joy'，'peoples'应为'people'，'seeing'应为'singing'，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。