Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答缺乏流畅性和自然表达，句子结构较简单，且表达有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并简洁明了地说明原因。

例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I find it difficult and it makes me feel exhausted.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且缺乏连贯性。建议使用正确的语法结构，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: No, I have never learned to sing because I don't like it and therefore, I am not interested in taking lessons.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，表达不够流畅。建议避免使用口语填充词，使用完整句子表达感情和理由。

例: Although I don't enjoy singing, if I had to sing for someone, I would choose my mother because I love her very much.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法和拼写，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Although I don't like singing, I believe it can bring happiness to people. I often listen to music, and it always makes me feel joyful.

× I don't like singing because I'm not good at it and I feel very tired when I'm singing.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm not good at it and I feel very tired when I sing.

这里的动词时态应保持一致，表示习惯性动作时用一般现在时，不能用进行时。

× Of course not, because I'm not like singing so I'm not interested in learning it.

✓ Of course not, because I don't like singing so I'm not interested in learning it.

动词'like'后面不接介词'to'，而是直接接动名词形式，且否定形式应为'don't like'。

× Though I don't like singing but I really think singing can bring hapiness to people.

✓ Though I don't like singing, I really think singing can bring happiness to people.

'Though'和'but'不能同时使用，二者都表示转折，使用其中一个即可。

× I always listening music so I feel happy when I listen to them.

✓ I always listen to music so I feel happy when I listen to it.

'always'后应使用一般现在时动词形式'listen'，而不是进行时'listening'。此外，'music'是不可数名词，代词应使用'it'。

× I always listening music so I feel happy when I listen to them.

✓ I always listen to music so I feel happy when I listen to it.

'music'是不可数名词，代词应使用单数形式'it'，而不是复数'them'。