Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用存在较大问题，建议练习简单句型表达个人喜好，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress, especially when I sing in the bathroom.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议使用简单明了的句子表达是否学习过唱歌，并说明相关经历。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy listening to music and singing at KTV with my friends.

提案: 回答内容混乱，表达不明确，建议练习用简单句子清楚表达想为谁唱歌，并注意句子连贯性。

例: I like to sing for my family and friends because they enjoy listening to me.

提案: 回答语句不通顺，词汇使用错误，建议练习用简单句表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it allows them to express their feelings and relax.

× Hi, yes I like thing I always I often singing a song when I was showing in bathroom because when I see you so I can I feel so I can decrease the so many stress for.

✓ Hi, yes I like singing. I often sing a song when I am showering in the bathroom because when I see you, I feel I can decrease a lot of stress.

原句中动词形式使用错误，如“singing a song”应为“singing”，且“showing”应为“showering”。动词-ing形式用法不当，导致句子不通顺。建议正确使用动词的-ing形式和一般现在时。

× I often singing a song when I was showing in bathroom because when I see you so I can I feel so I can decrease the so many stress for.

✓ I often sing a song when I am showering in the bathroom because when I see you, I feel I can decrease a lot of stress.

句中“was showing”应为“am showering”，因为描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× I can decrease the so many stress for.

✓ I can decrease a lot of stress.

“decrease ... for”是不正确的搭配，应该直接说“decrease a lot of stress”，去掉“for”。

× No, actually I haven't learned how to sing, just how big.

✓ No, actually I haven't learned how to sing, just how to sing a little.

原句“just how big”不合语境，可能是表达“just a little”，需要用正确的表达方式。

× I just like to listen music so many times and go to the KTV to sing on the source that allowed.

✓ I just like to listen to music many times and go to the KTV to sing on the stage that is allowed.

“listen music”应为“listen to music”，缺少介词“to”。“on the source that allowed”表达不清，应为“on the stage that is allowed”。

× Actually it's not a special one that I want to see info.

✓ Actually, there is no special person that I want to sing for.

“see info”不合语境，应为“sing for”。“one”指代不明确，改为“person”更准确。

× I will like thing to my friends, to my husband, to my parents to.

✓ I will like to sing to my friends, my husband, and my parents.

“thing”应为“sing”，且“to”重复多余。

× Two who want to listen my thing one.

✓ To those who want to listen to my singing.

“Two”应为“To”，“listen my thing”应为“listen to my singing”，缺少介词“to”。

× Yes, of course. I really think think I'm pretty happy Nista people, people always saying sound too.

✓ Yes, of course. I really think singing makes people pretty happy. People always say singing sounds good.

原句中“think think I'm pretty happy Nista people”语法混乱，词语错误。应表达“我认为唱歌让人快乐”，并且“people always saying sound too”应为“people always say singing sounds good”。

× To ensure their hapiness, show their loud.

✓ To ensure their happiness, they show it loudly.

“show their loud”表达错误，应为“show it loudly”，副词修饰动词。