Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的感受，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意句子结构的完整性，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially at karaoke bars. When I hold the microphone, I feel like a superstar. Although my friends might not enjoy it as much, I always have a great time.

提案: 回答中存在较多语法和拼写错误，表达不清晰。建议加强基础语法学习，注意单词拼写，使用完整句子表达观点。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. I see singing as a way to relax, so I only sing when I feel tired or want to cheer myself up.

提案: 回答表达了情感，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意主谓一致和词汇选择，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I would like to sing for my future soulmate. No matter who he is or where he is, I hope my singing won't scare him away. If he can accept it, I believe it must be destiny.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意句子连贯性和正确使用词汇，避免断句不当。

例: Yes, as I mentioned before, I only sing when I feel stressed or tired. I think singing helps me express my feelings, so I feel happier when I sing.

× I don't like singing is specially in the karaoke bar.

✓ I don't like singing, especially in the karaoke bar.

这里'specially'是拼写错误，应该是'esp ecially'，且句子中缺少逗号来分隔句子成分。动名词'singing'用法正确。

× When I grab the microphone, I feel like a superstar.

✓ When I grab the microphone, I feel like a superstar.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Maybe my friends are suffering, but for me, I really have a blast.

✓ Maybe my friends are suffering, but for me, I really have a blast.

此句代词使用正确，无需修改。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，'learned'是美式英语。根据语境选择一致的时态形式。

× I regard sin E as a way to relax myself.

✓ I regard singing as a way to relax myself.

'sin E'应为'singing'，动名词形式表示动作。

× So I only saying when I feel tired or away too.

✓ So I only sing when I feel tired or away too.

'saying'应为'sing'，此处为一般现在时动词，非动名词。

× Show my happy.

✓ It shows my happiness.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，且'happy'应为名词'happiness'。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句代词使用正确，无需修改。

× The person I really want to sing for is my future soulmate.

✓ The person I really want to sing for is my future soulmate.

此句代词使用正确，无需修改。

× Whoever he is or wherever he is, I hope my voice want scare him away.

✓ Whoever he is or wherever he is, I hope my voice won't scare him away.

'want'应为'won't'，表示否定的情态动词，代词使用正确。

× If he can bear this, I trust it must be destiny.

✓ If he can bear this, I trust it must be destiny.

此句情态动词使用正确，无需修改。

× I only sing when I feel stressed out or tired.

✓ I only sing when I feel stressed out or tired.

此句动词形式正确，无需修改。

× I think sitting can express my feelings.

✓ I think singing can express my feelings.

'sitting'应为'singing'，动词拼写错误。

× So. I feel more happier when I'm singing.

✓ So, I feel happier when I'm singing.

'more happier'是重复比较级，'happier'本身就是比较级，去掉'more'。