Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'when I singing' 대신 'when I sing'로 수정하고, 감정을 상상한다는 표현을 더 명확하게 설명하세요. 또한, 답변이 다소 짧고 구체적인 이유가 부족합니다.

例: Yes, I really like singing because when I sing, I feel free and it allows me to express a wide range of emotions, such as happiness and sadness.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부자연스럽고 문장이 끊어져 있습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 구체적으로 어떤 노래를 배웠는지 설명하면 좋겠습니다.

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing because I graduated from a theater university where I studied musical theater and practiced singing various musical numbers.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부자연스럽고 문장이 단절되어 있습니다. 감정을 표현할 때 더 자연스럽고 완전한 문장으로 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: That's a very emotional question. I want to sing for my mother, but I find it too touching and sad to try.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부자연스럽고 문장이 단절되어 있습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 노래가 어떻게 행복을 주는지 구체적으로 설명하세요.

例: Yes, obviously. Singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and inspires their self-confidence.

× Yes, I really like singing because when I singing I feel free and I can imagine various emotions.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because when I sing I feel free and I can imagine various emotions.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' to indicate the action in present tense after 'when I'. This is a common error where the -ing form is mistakenly used instead of the base form after certain conjunctions like 'when'.

× Yes, I did, because I graduated from theater university, so I I have learned. Musical. Singing an musical song number from. Major.

✓ Yes, I did, because I graduated from theater university, so I have learned musical singing and musical song numbers from my major.

The sentence has fragmented and incorrect tense usage. 'I have learned' is correct for present perfect tense indicating experience. Also, 'an musical' should be 'a musical' due to vowel sound rule. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper tense usage.

× It is very emotional question. Uhm, I wanna sing for my mother but I can't try that. Because is too. Touching me. You know, it's so sad.

✓ It is a very emotional question. Uhm, I want to sing for my mother but I can't try that because it is too touching for me. You know, it's so sad.

The pronoun 'is' is missing a subject 'it' in 'Because is too touching me'. Also, 'touching me' should be 'touching for me' to correctly express the emotional impact. 'Wanna' is informal and changed to 'want to' for correctness.

× Yes, obviously. Singing can bring happiness to people for the more. Help people. To express their emotions and. Inspired. Their self.

✓ Yes, obviously. Singing can bring happiness to people more. It helps people to express their emotions and inspires themselves.

The phrase 'for the more' is incorrect; 'more' alone is sufficient. Also, sentence fragments like 'Help people.' and 'Inspired. Their self.' are corrected to complete sentences with proper verb forms and pronouns. 'Their self' is corrected to 'themselves' for reflexive pronoun usage.