Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول أن تكون إجاباتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، مع تجنب الأخطاء اللغوية مثل "re life" التي قد تربك المستمع. استخدم جملًا مترابطة بشكل أفضل مع كلمات ربط مناسبة لجعل إجابتك أكثر سلاسة وطبيعية.

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a stressful day. For example, last weekend I sang with my family, which made us feel joyful and brought us closer together. Singing is a great way to relieve stress and connect with others.

提案: تأكد من استخدام الكلمات الصحيحة في إجاباتك، مثل "learned how to sing" بدلاً من "learned how to think". كما يُفضل توضيح أفكارك بشكل أكثر دقة مع استخدام تراكيب لغوية مناسبة.

例: I haven't formally learned how to sing because I didn't find it very interesting before. However, recently I have been trying to improve my singing skills by practicing with music apps, even though I don't think my voice is very good yet.

提案: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، مع تجنب الأخطاء اللغوية مثل "on thread together" واستخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة. ركز على التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل منطقي ومترابط.

例: Usually, I love singing for my family and friends when we are together. It helps me feel relaxed and improves my mood.

提案: حاول استخدام زمن الفعل بشكل صحيح وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية مثل "make" بدلاً من "makes" و"gave" بدلاً من "gives". استخدم تراكيب أكثر دقة لتوضيح أفكارك بشكل أفضل.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. It makes you feel happy and gives you positive energy, which can improve your day. Also, improving your singing skills can boost your confidence to face life.

× Singing is a great way to re life, stress and connect with.

✓ Singing is a great way to relieve life stress and connect with others.

The phrase 're life, stress' is incorrect and unclear. The correct verb is 'relieve' to express reducing stress. Also, 'connect with' should be followed by an object, so 'others' is added for clarity.

× I haven't really learned how to think, probably because I never found it very interesting.

✓ I haven't really learned how to sing, probably because I never found it very interesting.

The word 'think' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'sing'. The verb 'learned' is correctly used in the present perfect tense here.

× I am not sure about my answer but in usual I love singing for my family and friends when we are on thread together and that gave me more relaxation and I feel relaxed when I thinking.

✓ I am not sure about my answer but usually I love singing for my family and friends when we are together and that gives me more relaxation and I feel relaxed when I am thinking.

The phrase 'in usual' should be 'usually' as an adverb. 'On thread together' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'together'. 'Gave' should be 'gives' to match present tense. 'When I thinking' should be 'when I am thinking' to use the correct present continuous tense.

× And that related with my mood.

✓ And that is related to my mood.

The verb 'related' needs an auxiliary verb 'is' to form the correct present tense passive structure. Also, the preposition 'with' should be 'to' in this context.

× Sometimes singing make you feel happy and gave you a positive energy that help you to make your day better and sometimes improving your skills in singing gave you more confident to face the life.

✓ Sometimes singing makes you feel happy and gives you positive energy that helps you make your day better, and sometimes improving your singing skills gives you more confidence to face life.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'singing' is singular, so verbs should be 'makes', 'gives', and 'helps'. 'A positive energy' should be 'positive energy' without 'a'. 'More confident' should be 'more confidence'. 'The life' should be 'life' without 'the'.