Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 구성하며, 주제에 직접적으로 답하는 문장으로 시작하세요. 예를 들어, 'I don't like singing because I am not good at it, but I want to learn how to sing well.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

例: I don't like singing because I am not good at it, but I want to learn how to sing well.

提案: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 맞지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 '아니오' 또는 '예'로 답하고, 간단한 이유나 계획을 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어, 'No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to take lessons someday.'

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to take lessons someday.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 끊겨 자연스럽지 않습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 연결어를 사용해 설명하세요. 예를 들어, 'I want to sing for myself because singing helps me relieve stress in my free time.'

例: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me relieve stress in my free time.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 명확히 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며 연결어를 사용하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes people feel energetic and relaxed.'

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes people feel energetic and relaxed.

× Actually, I don't like singing because I'm not good at. Singing I'm. I an. I don't know how to sing well.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. I don't know how to sing well.

The original sentence has fragmented and incomplete sentences, causing sentence structure errors (ID 26). The phrase 'I'm not good at' requires an object, so 'it' is added. The fragments 'Singing I'm. I an.' are unclear and removed for clarity.

× Actually, no, I happened. How to sync but I? 1-2 how to learn thing Well someday it 'cause it is singing.

✓ Actually, no, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I want to learn someday because I like singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms and unclear phrases, indicating past tense and sentence structure issues (IDs 5 and 26). 'Happened' is incorrectly used instead of 'haven't learned'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I want to sing. For me, singing makes people. Leave the stress so I want to sing well in my free time.

✓ I want to sing. For me, singing helps people relieve stress, so I want to sing well in my free time.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect verb usage ('makes people leave the stress'). Correct sentence structure (ID 26) requires combining ideas properly and using correct verbs like 'helps' and 'relieve'.

× Is many people like to. Sing a song in makes individual energetic and relaxed so. People like to. Singing.

✓ Many people like to sing songs because it makes individuals energetic and relaxed, so people enjoy singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect sentence structure (ID 26). 'Is many people like to' is incorrect; it should be 'Many people like to'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.