Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有很多语法和发音错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇和语法，同时注意发音。回答时要直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因。

例: Yes, I like singing because it releases endorphins that make me feel happier. Also, singing with my friends helps us bond and relieve stress.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。避免使用不完整的句子和错误的时态。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because it is not a family tradition or my hobby. Instead, I prefer playing musical instruments.

提案: 你的回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议你先明确回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和无关内容。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she has given me a lot of love and support, especially when I feel sad.

提案: 回答中有很多拼写和语法错误，导致意思不明确。建议你用简单的句子表达观点，并用具体的理由支持你的看法。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it releases endorphins that reduce stress and boost confidence.

× I like saying becauses saying a sasken released endorfinas, which can make me more happy and you know, and that's saying with my friends.

✓ I like singing because singing a song releases endorphins, which can make me happier, and you know, singing with my friends.

这里'saying'应为动名词形式'singing'，表示喜欢做某事。'released'应为一般现在时'releases'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。'more happy'应为比较级'happier'。

× it can in tab lish friends friend mess with each others and it can also relieve strengths and enhance our relationship.

✓ It can establish friendships among friends and it can also relieve stress and enhance our relationships.

'friend mess'应为'friendships'，表示复数名词。'each others'应为'each other'，表示彼此。'strengths'应为'stress'，表示压力。'relationship'应为复数'relationships'，因为指多个人之间的关系。

× I haven't learned to. Sing a song I'm or otherwise and I didn't attend a formal singing lessons because it's not my family tradition and it's not my hobby to rather than saying a son, I like to playing the instrument and it can.

✓ I haven't learned to sing a song or otherwise, and I didn't attend formal singing lessons because it's not my family tradition and it's not my hobby. Rather than singing a song, I like playing instruments.

'learned to. Sing'中间不应有句号，且'sing'应为动词原形。'a formal singing lessons'中冠词'a'与复数'lessons'不匹配，应去掉'a'。'to playing'应为'playing'，因为动词'like'后接动名词。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。

× If you actually why who I want to sing for icing the I want you send to my mother becauses and she gave me a lot and when when I feel sex and she always gave me a love lots of love and give me fantastic service and send me to the horse.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for my mother because she has given me a lot. When I feel sad, she always gives me lots of love, provides fantastic support, and takes me to the hospital.

句中'you send'应为'I want to sing'。'becauses'应为'because'。'when when I feel sex'应为'when I feel sad'。'gave me a love lots of love'应为'gives me lots of love'，时态需一致。'send me to the horse'应为'takes me to the hospital'，表达更准确。整体句子需调整以符合语法和表达习惯。

× I'm definitely less becauses a singer sounds can release indoor FNIS which can help people to release their strengths and to prep and practice the confidence of seeing a sense and they can.

✓ I'm definitely less stressed because singing sounds can release endorphins which can help people to release their stress and to prepare and practice the confidence of singing, and they can.

'less'应为'less stressed'，表示减少压力。'a singer sounds'应为'singing sounds'。'indoor FNIS'应为'endorphins'。'release their strengths'应为'release their stress'。'prep'应为'prepare'。'seeing a sense'应为'singing sense'或'singing skills'。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。