Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然且不完整，句子結構不清晰，建議你直接回答問題並補充具體原因，避免斷句不完整。可以嘗試用完整句子表達你喜歡唱歌的原因，並提及具體的靈感來源。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I was inspired by my favorite Japanese band vocalist, whose powerful voice motivates me to improve my singing skills.

提案: 你的回答語法不完整且表達不清楚，建議你用完整句子說明你是否學過唱歌，並具體描述學習的方式或經驗。

例: I have never learned to sing professionally, but I picked up some skills from my grandmother, who encouraged me to sing when I was a child.

提案: 你的回答不連貫且語意不明，建議你直接回答問題，說明你唱歌的對象，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: I usually sing for myself because it makes me happy. However, I also admire singers who can reach high pitches and wide vocal ranges.

提案: 你的回答語句不完整且不流暢，建議你用清楚的句子表達你的看法，並用連接詞組織句子，使回答更有邏輯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It not only creates a joyful atmosphere but also helps individuals express their feelings and relieve stress.

× Same can be seen as one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ Singing can be seen as one of my favorite hobbies.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject. 'Same' is incorrect here; the intended subject is 'Singing'. This correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I like to sing because.

✓ I like to sing because it makes me happy.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding a reason completes the sentence and provides clarity.

× I was inspired by my favorite singer, which is a Japanese band vocal.

✓ I was inspired by my favorite singer, who is the vocalist of a Japanese band.

'Which' is used for things, not people. 'Who' is the correct relative pronoun for people. Also, 'band vocal' is incorrect; 'vocalist of a band' is the proper phrase.

× I never learn how to sing professionally, but I take up these skills from.

✓ I never learned how to sing professionally, but I picked up these skills from

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past context. 'Take up' is incorrect here; 'picked up' is the correct phrasal verb meaning to acquire skills informally.

× Mostly from my grandmother.

✓ Mostly from my grandmother.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be combined with the previous sentence or rephrased to be complete.

× And she told me to sing when I was little.

✓ And she taught me to sing when I was little.

'Told me to sing' implies a command, but the intended meaning is that she instructed or taught. 'Taught me to sing' is more appropriate.

× To answer these questions, I think.

✓ To answer this question, I think

The phrase is incomplete and awkward. It should be connected to the following sentence for clarity.

× I sing for only myself, for.

✓ I sing only for myself.

The original sentence is incomplete and redundant. The correction is concise and grammatically correct.

× I really look up to some other singers which which they are.

✓ I really look up to some other singers who are

'Which' is incorrect for people; 'who' is correct. Also, 'which which they are' is redundant and incorrect.

× Good as. High pitch or orange of? Oh ranges of. Songs and I just.

✓ good at high-pitched or orange ranges of songs, and I just...

This sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems to attempt to say 'good at high-pitched or orange ranges of songs'. 'Orange' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'range'. The sentence needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Well speaking, the happiness seeing is.

✓ Well, speaking of happiness,

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a proper introductory phrase.

× I think seeing is definitely one of the factors, but it can also brings some.

✓ I think singing is definitely one of the factors, but it can also bring some

'Seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'can also brings' is incorrect; modal verbs are followed by base form verbs, so 'bring' is correct.

× The likely addventure atmosphere.

✓ a lively adventurous atmosphere.

'Likely addventure' is incorrect and unclear. The intended phrase is probably 'a lively adventurous atmosphere'.

× To 1 to someone and.

✓ to someone, and

This fragment is unclear and incomplete. It should be connected properly to the sentence.

× Yes, I agree that happiness can be generated by singing.

✓ Yes, I agree that happiness can be generated by singing.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.