Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习用简单句子表达情感，避免语法错误，并且注意发音和用词准确。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings. When I feel anxious or sad, singing makes me feel relaxed and better.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，缺乏逻辑。建议学习如何用简单句子描述过去的经历，并且注意句子结构和时态的正确使用。

例: No, I have never learned to sing systematically. In school, we only sang songs together, but the teachers did not teach us how to sing properly.

提案: 回答不清楚且含有大量错误，表达混乱。建议练习用简单明了的句子表达自己的想法，避免使用错误词汇。

例: I usually sing for myself or sometimes for my close friends. I don't think I am very talented, so I prefer singing in private.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持观点，避免无关或混乱的内容。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness. Many people sing to relieve stress or share their feelings, and some even post their songs on social media to connect with others.

× Yes, of course. So I like seeing and I think you when I sing the song, I can express my feeling like when I was.

✓ Yes, of course. So I like singing and I think when I sing a song, I can express my feelings like when I was anxious or just suffering from some pain.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示喜欢做某事，原句中seeing应为singing。表达感受时，feelings应为复数形式。

× Anxious or just suffering from some pain, I can say and relax.

✓ When I am anxious or just suffering from some pain, I can sing and relax.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致表达不清晰。应补充完整句子结构。

× Actually, I haven't learned how to say systematically.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing systematically.

动词错误，'say'应为'sing'，且时态正确使用现在完成时。

× I remembered that we had to some singular sense and are jealous and so when I was in my primary school and the junior high school, but the teachers just told us it is saying something together and do not tell us the.

✓ I remember that we had some singing lessons when I was in primary school and junior high school, but the teachers just told us to sing together and did not teach us systematically.

原句语序混乱，词汇错误，缺少完整表达。应调整句子结构，使意思清晰。

× Well, I do not have fursat talented to same software well, so I just say for myself or you really went to the Katy B or myself or with some of my closest friends.

✓ Well, I do not have the talent or opportunity to sing well, so I just sing for myself or sometimes for my closest friends.

原句中代词使用错误，词汇拼写错误，句子不通顺。应使用正确代词和词汇表达。

× Yes, yes, of course, like I always just say some wild horse, the frame from the like emotional damage or some other events and incidents that happened to them just the same and the world posted their sounds on the social media.

✓ Yes, yes, of course. I always just sing to release emotions from emotional damage or other events and incidents that happened to me, and then I post my songs on social media.

动词使用错误，'say'应为'sing'，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。