Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在多处拼写错误（如'saying'应为'singing'），句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写，使用完整句子，并避免重复表达。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions and connect with others who share the same interest. This way, I can make new friends easily. Overall, singing is a great way to refresh my mind.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如时态错误和词汇使用不当。建议加强语法基础，特别是动词时态的正确使用。同时，句子表达应更简洁，避免冗余。可以用更准确的词汇描述学习唱歌的方法，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing mostly by myself. I improve my singing skills by carefully listening to music and memorizing the lyrics. For example, when I listen to songs by Lady Gaga, I can quickly remember the words and sing along, which helps me practice.

提案: 这段回答语句不通顺，表达混乱，且存在大量拼写和语法错误。建议先理清思路，明确回答问题，使用简单句表达想为谁唱歌及原因。避免使用错误单词，确保句子完整且有逻辑。

例: I like to sing for myself because singing helps me release emotions and reduce stress. It acts like a remedy for the pressures in life. Sometimes, singing also makes me feel better when I am upset.

提案: 回答中多处拼写错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的语法结构，并用具体例子支持观点。使用连接词使句子更连贯，表达更清晰。

例: I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people, but it depends on the situation. For example, when someone feels sad or stressed, listening to relaxing or happy music can help improve their mood. Singing along to cheerful songs can also boost their spirits and create a positive atmosphere.

× Sure, I really enjoy saying things, it helps me relax and relieve stress after long day.

✓ Sure, I really enjoy singing, it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day.

这里'saying'用错了，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。'enjoy'后面接动词时用动名词形式。

× Sure, I really enjoy saying things, it helps me relax and relieve stress after long day.

✓ Sure, I really enjoy singing, it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day.

'long day'前缺少冠词'a'，因为这里指的是单数的“一天”。

× Seeing also stimulate my emotion and allow me to connect with others.

✓ Singing also stimulates my emotions and allows me to connect with others.

'Seeing'应为'Singing'，且主语为单数，谓语动词需加-s。

× Seeing also stimulate my emotion and allow me to connect with others.

✓ Singing also stimulates my emotions and allows me to connect with others.

主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s，'stimulate'和'allow'应改为'stimulates'和'allows'。

× Who shares the same interest, which is a great way to make friends new friends.

✓ Who share the same interest, which is a great way to make new friends.

'Who'指复数，谓语动词应为复数形式'share'。'make friends new friends'语序错误，应为'make new friends'。

× Overall it relieve my mind.

✓ Overall it relieves my mind.

主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s，'relieve'改为'relieves'。

× Yes, I have learning about how to sing, but most by myself.

✓ Yes, I have learned about how to sing, but mostly by myself.

'have learning'错误，应为现在完成时'have learned'。'most'应为副词'mostly'。

× Yes, I have learning about how to sing, but most by myself.

✓ Yes, I have learned about how to sing, but mostly by myself.

'most'用作副词时应为'mostly'，表示“主要是自己学的”。

× I improve my singing skills by listening to music carefully and trying to memorize the words.

✓ I improve my singing skills by listening to music carefully and trying to memorize the words.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× For example, when I listen to sounds by Lady Gaga, I can quickly remember the words and singer down which helps me practice.

✓ For example, when I listen to songs by Lady Gaga, I can quickly remember the words and sing them down which helps me practice.

'sounds'应为'songs'，'singer down'错误，应为'sing them down'。

× I like to see it for myself because saying helps me release emotions and reduce stress is acted like a great remedy for they need life pressures.

✓ I like to sing for myself because singing helps me release emotions and reduce stress; it acts like a great remedy for the needed life pressures.

'see it'应为'sing for myself'，'saying'应为'singing'，句子结构混乱，需调整。'they need life pressures'应为'the needed life pressures'。

× Also why failed only seeing around me to press my eye feeling and feel better?

✓ Also, why not only sing around me to express my feelings and feel better?

句子结构混乱，'failed'应为'not'，'seeing'应为'sing'，'press my eye feeling'应为'express my feelings'。

× I think seeing can definitely bring happiness to people but it depends on the situation.

✓ I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people but it depends on the situation.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示“唱歌”。

× For example when someone fails sad or stressed they may say listening to relaxing or happiness sounds to fail betters and raise their emotion.

✓ For example, when someone feels sad or stressed, they may try listening to relaxing or happy sounds to feel better and raise their emotions.

'fails sad'应为'feels sad'，'say listening'应为'try listening'，'happiness sounds'应为'happy sounds'，'fail betters'应为'feel better'。

× Singing along to chair for music can also boast mode and crew.

✓ Singing along to cheerful music can also boost mood and cheer.

'chair for music'应为'cheerful music'，'boast mode and crew'应为'boost mood and cheer'。