Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

例: I don't like singing because I often forget the lyrics and find it hard to pronounce the words correctly. Also, I feel that music is too noisy for me.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚地描述学习唱歌的经历。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child and in high school. I attended music classes where teachers taught me how to express emotions through singing.

提案: 回答不连贯且难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达不想为谁唱歌的原因，避免语法错误和口语填充词。

例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I don't think I sing well, and I don't want to disturb others.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. However, if someone doesn't enjoy singing, it might not make them happy.

× I don't like singing because I think I can't remember the words about the song and I can't obtain the accurate pronunciation and I think music is very noisy for me so I don't like it.

✓ I don't like singing because I think I can't remember the words of the song and I can't get the accurate pronunciation, and I think music is very noisy for me, so I don't like it.

这里'singing'用法正确，但'words about the song'应改为'words of the song'，因为表达“歌曲的歌词”时应使用介词'of'。此外，'obtain the accurate pronunciation'不自然，改为'get the accurate pronunciation'更合适。建议注意介词的正确使用和动词搭配。

× I learned how to sing, yes. When I was a child and a senior school students, I have the music I have I attended the music classes.

✓ I learned how to sing, yes. When I was a child and a senior school student, I attended music classes.

句中'students'应为单数'student'，因为指的是自己一个人。'I have the music I have'是语法错误，应删除。'attended the music classes'中'the'不必要，改为'attended music classes'更自然。注意时态和名词单复数的正确使用。

× The teachers have taught me how to think and how to find the feeling of thing.

✓ The teachers taught me how to think and how to find the feeling of things.

'thing'应为复数'things'，因为表达的是一般的“事物的感觉”。'have taught'时态不符合上下文，改为过去式'taught'。注意代词和名词的数的一致性。

× No one 'cause I, I can't appreciate what I have account appreciated the songs so that ice thing, so I don't want to disturb others.

✓ No one, because I can't appreciate the songs I have already appreciated, so I don't want to disturb others.

句子结构混乱，'have account appreciated'错误，应为'have already appreciated'。'so that ice thing'无意义，应删除。建议简化句子结构，注意代词和时态的正确使用。

× I can't along I come. I think, uh, who listen to my thumb?

✓ I can't sing along. I think, uh, who would listen to my voice?

'I can't along I come'语法错误，应为'I can't sing along'。'who listen to my thumb'不合逻辑，应为'who would listen to my voice'。注意代词和词汇的正确使用。

× Yeah, I think well, thing can bring happiness to people. I I think singing is a way to express the emotions.

✓ Yeah, I think well, singing can bring happiness to people. I think singing is a way to express emotions.

'thing'应为'singing'，因为上下文指的是唱歌。'the emotions'改为'emotions'更自然。注意代词和名词的正确使用。

× But to someone who don't think well is not the way to bring happiness.

✓ But to someone who doesn't think well, it is not a way to bring happiness.

'who don't think'应为'who doesn't think'，主语是'someone'，单数。句子缺少主语，补充'it is'。注意主谓一致和句子结构完整。