Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意主谓一致。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体原因支持。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I also enjoy listening to songs and often sing along to my favorite ones.

提案: 回答中语句不通顺且含糊不清，建议用简单明了的句子表达没有学过唱歌的事实，并说明原因。避免使用不相关或错误的词汇。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because it is expensive. I just sing as a hobby for fun.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，建议先明确回答对象，然后用简洁的句子表达原因，注意代词的正确使用。

例: I want to sing for my mom because she works very hard and has given me a lot of love. Singing is my way to show gratitude to her.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议直接回答问题并用具体理由支持，避免使用不恰当的词汇。

例: Of course, singing can bring happiness. When I sing, I feel relaxed and forget my worries.

× I quite like singing because they in can make me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ I quite like singing because it can make me feel happy and relaxed.

这里的主语是单数的"singing"，所以应该用单数代词"it"，而不是复数代词"they"。

× I love you listening to the song.

✓ I love listening to songs.

句中"you"使用错误，应去掉，且"song"应使用复数形式"songs"，因为通常喜欢听多首歌。

× So I know a lot of songs so I want to repeat it.

✓ So I know a lot of songs so I want to repeat them.

"songs"是复数，指代时应使用复数代词"them"，而不是单数"it"。

× Singing songs.

✓ I like singing songs.

该句缺少主语和谓语，属于句子结构错误，应补充完整。

× No, I haven't. I adjust interesting ate an I have never.

✓ No, I haven't. I have never learned how to sing.

原句语法混乱，缺少正确的动词形式，应该使用现在完成时表达从未学过。

× To take and causes of it because there's two expensive it is normal Sicily just a hobby.

✓ I haven't taken lessons because they are too expensive; singing is just a hobby for me.

原句连接词使用错误，且表达不清，应使用合适的连接词和句子结构。

× It does a hobby and I don't say it can make me be professors.

✓ It's just a hobby and I don't think it can make me a professional.

"does a hobby"用法错误，应为"is a hobby"；"say"用错，应为"think"；"professors"应为"professional"。

× I want to see for my mom.

✓ I want to sing for my mom.

"see"用错，应为"sing"，符合上下文语境。

× He craved.

✓ She is tired.

"He craved"无意义，推测想表达"她很累"，应改为"She is tired"。

× I want to convey my gratitude to further.

✓ I want to convey my gratitude to her.

"further"用错，应为人称代词"her"。

× She is so tired and she gives me too much love and I want to send to him to her.

✓ She is so tired and she gives me so much love, and I want to send it to her.

"too much love"改为"so much love"更合适；"send to him to her"结构错误，应为"send it to her"。

× Of course it can when I when I am singing.

✓ Of course it can when I am singing.

句中重复"when I"，应删除多余部分。

× I still realized an I can forget the treasure.

✓ I still realize and I can forget the troubles.

"realized an"错误，应为"realize and"；"treasure"用词不当，应为"troubles"（烦恼）。