Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和拼写错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意单词拼写（如'singing'而非'seeing'），并且句子结构要完整，避免断句。回答时应直接回应问题，表达清楚自己的感受和原因。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I often sing with my friends, which is a lot of fun. However, I feel more comfortable singing in small groups rather than in front of many people.

提案: 回答中存在大量语法和词汇错误，导致意思不明确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达清晰完整的句子。同时，回答应紧扣问题，说明是否接受过正式训练，并简要描述相关经历。

例: No, I have never received formal training in singing, but I attended some classes when I was young. I enjoyed practicing singing with my friends because it helped me improve my voice and gain confidence.

提案: 回答中词汇使用错误较多，影响表达效果。建议注意单词拼写和语法，确保句子通顺。回答时应直接说明想为谁唱歌，并简要说明原因。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she is like my best friend and has always supported me. Singing for her would be a way to show my gratitude for her love and care.

提案: 回答中存在拼写和语法错误，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，逻辑清晰地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: Sure, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For example, when I sing with my friends, it helps me relax and forget about stress after a long day. Singing also improves my mood and boosts my confidence, especially when I perform in front of others.

× Yes, I really love seeing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

✓ Yes, I really love singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

这里'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但句意应表达“唱歌”，正确的动词是'sing'，而非'see'。应使用'singing'表示喜欢唱歌。

× I often seen cells with my friends which is a lot of fun.

✓ I often sing songs with my friends which is a lot of fun.

'seen'是动词'see'的过去分词，句中应使用动词'sing'的现在时态，表示经常唱歌。'cells'应为'songs'，可能是拼写错误。

× However, I am not very confident when saying in front of my.

✓ However, I am not very confident when singing in front of people.

'saying'用法错误，应为'singing'表示唱歌。'in front of my'缺少宾语，应该是'in front of people'或类似表达。

× Many people, so you really preferred to see in a small group.

✓ There are many people, so I really prefer to sing in a small group.

句子结构混乱，'you'应为'I'，'see'应为'sing'。表达应为“有很多人，所以我更喜欢在小组里唱歌”。

× No, I have never received formal.

✓ No, I have never received formal training.

句子不完整，缺少名词'training'。

× Training is saying but I did attend something classes whenever young.

✓ Training is singing but I did attend some classes when I was young.

'something classes'应为'some classes'，'whenever young'应为'when I was young'。

× I really enjoyed practicing cells with my friends because it was a fun way to improve my words, voice and gain confidence.

✓ I really enjoyed practicing songs with my friends because it was a fun way to improve my words, voice and gain confidence.

'cells'应为'songs'，拼写错误。

× Saying how it's always being a healthy of my even though I haven't studied it seriously.

✓ Singing has always been a healthy habit of mine even though I haven't studied it seriously.

'Saying'应为'Singing'，'being a healthy of my'结构错误，应为'been a healthy habit of mine'。

× I have also seen for my mother because she is like my best friend and had always supported me.

✓ I have also sung for my mother because she is like my best friend and has always supported me.

'seen'应为'sung'，动词'sing'的过去分词形式。'had'应为'has'，与现在完成时态一致。

× She has told me many languages and shared a lot of knowledge with me.

✓ She has taught me many languages and shared a lot of knowledge with me.

'told me many languages'用法错误，应为'taught me many languages'，表示教我多种语言。

× I really appreciate her love and care so saying for her would be a way to show my graduated.

✓ I really appreciate her love and care so singing for her would be a way to show my gratitude.

'saying'应为'singing'，'graduated'用词错误，应为'gratitude'表示感激。

× Sure, I think saying can definitely bring happiness to people for example, but I seen with my friends it helps me.

✓ Sure, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For example, when I sing with my friends, it helps me.

'saying'应为'singing'，'seen'应为'sing'或'singing'，句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× It helps me relax and forget about price after a long day.

✓ It helps me relax and forget about pressure after a long day.

'price'用词错误，应为'pressure'表示压力。

× Also saying it's a great way to improve my mood and boost my computers especially when I perform in front of others.

✓ Also, singing is a great way to improve my mood and boost my confidence especially when I perform in front of others.

'saying'应为'singing'，'computers'用词错误，应为'confidence'表示自信。