Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有发音错误和语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意发音准确性，避免拼写错误，并且用完整句子表达观点。

例: No, I don't really like singing because I can't sing well and I often find it hard to hit the right notes.

提案: 回答中语法结构混乱，句子不连贯。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I really want to learn when I have free time.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇，并且表达要具体和连贯。

例: I want to sing for my mom. If I can sing well one day, I will show her my progress and express my love through singing.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不完整。建议注意语法正确性，使用恰当的词汇，并且完整表达观点。

例: Definitely yes. I enjoy listening to beautiful songs because they make me feel happy.

× Well, actually I'm not really into sini.

✓ Well, actually I'm not really into singing.

这里'sini'是拼写错误，正确的动名词形式是'singing'，表示喜欢做某事时用动名词形式。

× Case I Can't Sing well, I can't find the right turn to sing.

✓ Because I can't sing well, I can't find the right tone to sing.

句子结构不完整且用词错误，'Case'应为'Because'，'turn'应为'tone'，表达原因和正确的词汇。

× No, as I just mentioned, I'm not really good at singing. That just because I haven't, I have never learned how to sing but.

✓ No, as I just mentioned, I'm not really good at singing. That's just because I have never learned how to sing.

句子中'that just because'应为'that's just because'，且'but'位置错误，应去掉。时态使用现在完成时表示过去到现在的经历。

× If I'm free.

✓ If I'm free, I really want to learn how to sing.

这是一个不完整的句子，应与前句合并或补充完整，表达完整的条件句。

× Maybe it's my mom. If one day I can seem very well, I will show her.

✓ Maybe it's my mom. If one day I can sing very well, I will show her.

'seem'用错，正确动词应为'sing'，表示唱歌。

× I will let her know my improvement, and I will let her know I love her through thinning.

✓ I will let her know my improvement, and I will let her know I love her through singing.

'thinning'拼写错误，应为'singing'，表示通过唱歌表达爱。

× I'm a person who like to listen to the music when I when I listen to the.

✓ I'm a person who likes to listen to music when I listen to it.

主语是单数，谓语动词应加's'，'the music'前的定冠词可省略，'when I listen to the'不完整，需补充宾语。

× Beautiful, skinny, I would be happy.

✓ Beautiful songs, I would be happy.

'skinny'用错，形容词应与名词搭配，'beautiful songs'更合适，表达听美妙的歌曲时感到快乐。