Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中多次出现了“seeing”这个词，应该是想说“singing”，这影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音和拼写，避免词汇错误。同时，回答中句子结构不够连贯，内容重复，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. I often sing with my friends, which makes the experience even more enjoyable. Attending live music sessions is one of the happiest moments in my life.

提案: 回答中多次出现“seeing”和“saying”的错误，应为“singing”。此外，句子结构混乱，表达不连贯，建议练习正确使用动词和句子连接，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I haven't taken any professional singing lessons. However, I often watch videos online to learn singing techniques and improve my skills. Although I'm not a professional singer, singing brings me a lot of happiness.

提案: 你的回答内容具体且有感情，表达了原因和情感，结构较好。但“Sing”应小写，且可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。建议注意大小写和句子衔接。

例: I want to sing for my mother because she has always encouraged me since I was a child. She has been very supportive throughout my life, so singing for her is my way to show gratitude and love.

提案: 回答中多次出现“seeing”错误，应为“singing”。句子断裂，表达不连贯，建议使用连接词并注意句子完整性，使表达更自然。

例: Sure, I feel very happy whenever I sing or listen to songs. The lyrics help me express my emotions and relieve stress. For example, after a long day, singing my favorite song always makes me feel better.

× Well, I really enjoy singing because I think seeing is a good way to relieve my stress and I like seeing with my friends.

✓ Well, I really enjoy singing because I think singing is a good way to relieve my stress and I like singing with my friends.

这里'seeing'是拼写错误，应该是'singing'。动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。

× Go to Carol Kaye session and seeing our favorite son is my. Happiest things in my life.

✓ Going to Carol Kaye sessions and seeing our favorite song are the happiest things in my life.

动词短语应使用动名词形式'Going'和'seeing'，且'son'应为'song'。主语是复数，谓语动词用复数形式'are'。

× No, I haven't taken any professional seeing lessons.

✓ No, I haven't taken any professional singing lessons.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌的课程。

× However in my free time I often watch videos on Billy Billy where I can learn lots about saying techniques and improve my skills.

✓ However, in my free time I often watch videos on Billy Billy where I can learn lots about singing techniques and improve my skills.

'saying'应为'singing'，表示唱歌技巧。

× But I think I'm not a singer so saying just bring me happy.

✓ But I think I'm not a singer so singing just brings me happiness.

'saying'应为'singing'，且动词'sing'第三人称单数形式为'brings'，'happy'应改为名词'happiness'。

× I don't. I don't have two seeing like a singer.

✓ I don't. I don't have to sing like a singer.

'two'应为'to'，'seeing'应为'sing'，表示不需要像歌手那样唱歌。

× She has been very supportive throughout my life, so Sing for her is the way to show my gratitude and love.

✓ She has been very supportive throughout my life, so singing for her is the way to show my gratitude and love.

动词不定式应改为动名词形式'singing'，表示动作。

× Sure, I feel very happy whenever I sing. Because even I'm listen to the set sounds.

✓ Sure, I feel very happy whenever I sing because I even listen to the set sounds.

句子不应断开，'I'm listen'应为'I listen'，保持一般现在时。

× Because the lyrics can express my emotion and relieve my stress.

✓ Because the lyrics can express my emotions and relieve my stress.

'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，表示多种情感。

× For example, after a long day, seeing my favorite song always makes me feel better.

✓ For example, after a long day, singing my favorite song always makes me feel better.

'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。