Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误，建议练习简单句型表达自己的感受，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed. A good song can also make people happy.

提案: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议用简单句直接回答问题，并说明原因。

例: No, I have never learned to sing because when I was a child, I was busy learning English and Chinese, so I had no free time.

提案: 回答不清晰，表达混乱，建议用简单明了的句子说明想为谁唱歌以及原因。

例: I want to sing for myself because singing makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议用简单句表达观点并举例说明。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. When I listen to music, it always makes me feel happy.

× Yes, I like saying because I think will because we're saying I feel so relaxed and I think.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think singing makes me feel so relaxed.

这里'saying'应该用动名词形式'singing'，因为动词'like'后面接动名词表示喜欢做某事。

× I think a good a good song. Come make me people feel happy.

✓ I think a good song can make people feel happy.

句子结构混乱，'come'应为'can'，且动词后应接动词原形'make'，表示能力。

× No, I haven't it.

✓ No, I haven't.

'haven't'后不需要加'it'，这里是完成时的否定句，'haven't'后直接接过去分词或省略。

× I haven't learned to eat because when I was a child.

✓ I haven't learned to sing because when I was a child.

'learned to eat'不符合语境，应为'learned to sing'，表示学唱歌。

× Aye. I I also I learn my English, Chinese or and so on, so I don't have any free time to learn.

✓ I also learned English, Chinese, and so on, so I didn't have any free time to learn singing.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，应使用过去时态表达过去的学习经历。

× I want to sing for myself because I think say sing a song.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I think singing a song

'say sing'不正确，应为动名词形式'singing'，表示喜欢唱歌。

× Come made me how? Enough brief.

✓ makes me feel happy and relaxed.

原句无意义，需重组表达唱歌让自己感到快乐和放松。

× Yes, I think so because why when I listen while listening music I always saying it that can make me so happy.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I listen to music, I always sing; it makes me so happy.

'saying'应为'sing'，动词形式错误；'listen'后应加介词'to'；句子结构需调整使其通顺。