Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单且准确的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免使用错误词汇。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduces my stress.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清楚。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并简要说明学习经历和感受。

例: Yes, I learned singing when I was in primary school. It was very useful and practical for me.

提案: 回答不连贯，词汇使用错误。建议明确表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: I would like to sing for my friends because they always support me, which makes me feel comfortable and gives me a sense of achievement.

提案: 回答中断且语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的时态和词汇，并用连词连接句子。

例: Yes, I think singing is a good way to boost people's mood and improve mental health.

× A couple of larger yes, I like singing because it can reduce my stress and boost my munch.

✓ A couple of large yeses, I like singing because it can reduce my stress and boost my mood.

这里“a couple of”后面应该接可数名词的复数形式，原句中“larger yes”不符合语法，应改为“large yeses”。另外，“munch”应为“mood”，意思是情绪。

× I have shake up. Music surname when I in the primary school.

✓ I have shaken up. Music started when I was in primary school.

“have shake up”应为现在完成时，动词应为过去分词“shaken up”。“Music surname”不合适，应改为“Music started”。“when I in the primary school”缺少动词，应为“when I was in primary school”。

× I'd like to. I won't you sing for my friends because they're always share Army Ann.

✓ I'd like to. I want to sing for my friends because they always share harmony.

“I won't you sing”语法错误，应为“I want to sing”。“share Army Ann”不合适，应为“share harmony”，意思是分享和谐。

× Let me feel comfortable and a sense of achievement.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable and gives me a sense of achievement.

“Let me feel”用法不当，应该用“It makes me feel”。“a sense of achievement”前应加“a”，表示“一种成就感”。

× Yes. I think singing it's a good way to. A boosted people's mood and improve our mental health.

✓ Yes. I think singing is a good way to boost people's mood and improve our mental health.

“singing it's a good way to”中“it's”应为“is”，且句子不完整，应为“a good way to boost”。“A boosted”应为“boost”，动词原形。