Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do bạn thích hát và cảm nhận của bạn khi hát.

例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax. Although I think my singing is not very good, I still enjoy practicing alone and sometimes go to karaoke parties with friends to improve my skills.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn học hát.

例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn songs by listening to them repeatedly and trying to memorize the lyrics to understand their meaning.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn không muốn hát cho ai nghe.

例: I don't want to sing for anyone because I think my singing is not good and I feel embarrassed. Therefore, I prefer to sing alone at home and try to improve my voice by listening carefully.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời mạch lạc và tránh ngắt quãng câu không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Thêm ví dụ hoặc giải thích cụ thể về cách hát mang lại cảm xúc.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because melodies and lyrics can evoke various emotions such as happiness, sadness, or confidence, depending on the song's message.

× Yes, I love singing but I think pretty bad so I often avoid my friends.

✓ Yes, I love singing but I think I sing pretty badly, so I often avoid my friends.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb in the second clause and uses 'pretty bad' incorrectly as an adverb. The correction adds 'I sing' and changes 'bad' to 'badly' to properly modify the verb 'sing'.

× Invited to a karaoke parties and trying to practice alone to improve my skills beside it singing.

✓ I am invited to karaoke parties and try to practice alone to improve my singing skills.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject and verb. 'Invited' should be 'I am invited' or 'I attend', and 'beside it singing' is unclear and corrected to 'my singing skills'.

× Make me feel more relaxed so I love it.

✓ It makes me feel more relaxed, so I love it.

The original sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' clarifies what makes the speaker feel relaxed, and the verb is corrected to 'makes' to agree with the singular subject.

× No actually I just seeing it just sing a song.

✓ No, actually I just see it as singing a song.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrectly used in present continuous; 'see' in simple present is appropriate here. Also, the phrase is clarified for meaning.

× By listening it many times and try to remember the lyrics so saying.

✓ By listening to it many times and trying to remember the lyrics, I can sing.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'try' should be 'trying' to maintain parallel structure, and the sentence is completed for clarity.

× Like what actually is going on on this song?

✓ I wonder what is actually going on in this song.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The correction rephrases it into a proper question with correct preposition 'in'.

× Oh no, no ones because I sing pretty bad so I don't want to.

✓ Oh no, no one because I sing pretty badly, so I don't want to.

'No ones' is incorrect; the singular 'no one' is correct. Also, 'pretty bad' should be 'pretty badly' to modify the verb 'sing'.

× Embarrass myself.

✓ I don't want to embarrass myself.

This is a sentence fragment. Adding 'I don't want to' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× So I just staying alone at home and listen to it.

✓ So I just stay alone at home and listen to it.

'Staying' is incorrect here; the simple present 'stay' fits the habitual action described.

× To figure it out what. Is wrong with my voice.

✓ To figure out what is wrong with my voice.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. The correction combines the fragments into a proper infinitive phrase.

× Yes, because I believe songs with them melodies can make a. Person. Can feel. Happiness, sadness, or. Confidence just by the words of the song.

✓ Yes, because I believe songs with their melodies can make a person feel happiness, sadness, or confidence just by the words of the song.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect pronoun 'them' instead of 'their'. The correction combines fragments into a coherent sentence and fixes pronoun usage.