Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni uttor e kichu bhul ache, jemon grammar o sentence structure. Apnar uttor ke aro spostho o sohoje bujhte parbe emon vabe bolte hobe. Apni proshner uttor shuru korben direct, tarpor kichu supporting details deben, kintu beshi bistarito noy. Linking words babohar korben jate kotha shongjog thake.

例: No, I don't like singing because I am not very good at it. When I was young, I took singing lessons at an academy, but I didn't enjoy it much. Therefore, now I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself.

提案: Apnar uttor e grammar o sentence structure khub important. Apni proshner uttor direct deben, tarpor kichu supporting details deben. Linking words babohar korben jate kotha shongjog thake. Apnar vocabulary aro bhalo korte hobe, ebong proshner shathe relevant kotha bolte hobe.

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. There was a teacher who taught us singing at the academy, but I didn't enjoy it very much. So, I prefer listening to rap songs instead.

提案: Apnar uttor e sentence gulo incomplete o asangjog. Apni proshner uttor direct deben, tarpor kichu supporting details deben. Linking words babohar korben jate kotha shongjog thake. Vocabulary aro bhalo korte hobe ebong sentence gulo complete korte hobe.

例: I usually don't sing for anyone because I am not confident. However, I enjoy listening to soft music and sometimes classical songs.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o vocabulary er bhul ache. Apni proshner uttor direct deben, tarpor kichu supporting details deben. Linking words babohar korben jate kotha shongjog thake. Apnar vocabulary aro bhalo korte hobe ebong sentence gulo spostho korte hobe.

例: Yes, definitely. I think singing brings a lot of happiness to people's lives because we are often stressed with work. Sometimes, listening to a song can help us feel relaxed.

× No, I don't like singing becauses where I am not very good at it.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I am not very good at it.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'where' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Use 'because' to show reason clearly.

× When I was young I took singing lessons at Academy. Butter.

✓ When I was young, I took singing lessons at an academy, but I didn't enjoy it much.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Butter' is likely a misspelling of 'but'. Also, 'Academy' needs an article 'an' and the sentence should be combined for clarity.

× now I prefer listening music rather than singing myself.

✓ Now I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. So, 'listening music' should be 'listening to music'.

× Yes, as I told earlier, I learn and singing.

✓ Yes, as I told earlier, I learned singing.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past context. Also, 'and singing' is incorrect; it should be 'learned singing'.

× When I was in my primary school at an Academy, there was a thing is seeing there was a teacher who teach students how to sing and I don't like it very much, so I prefer listening song rap.

✓ When I was in primary school at an academy, there was a singing class with a teacher who taught students how to sing, but I didn't like it very much, so I prefer listening to rap songs.

The sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'There was a thing is seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a singing class'. 'Teach' should be past tense 'taught'. 'Listening song rap' should be 'listening to rap songs'.

× I usually don't sing for anyone but I like listening song.

✓ I usually don't sing for anyone, but I like listening to songs.

Again, 'listening' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to indicate general preference.

× I like listening soft music and also sometimes I enjoy.

✓ I like listening to soft music, and sometimes I enjoy it.

'Listening soft music' needs 'to'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'I enjoy' should be followed by an object, here 'it'.

× Classic musical song. And.

✓ I also enjoy classic musical songs.

The fragment 'Classic musical song. And.' is incomplete. It should be combined into a full sentence.

× I think singing is a thing that brings lots of of hapiness in people life becauses we are very a fooled with work pager and sometimes listening a song can feel relaxed.

✓ I think singing is something that brings a lot of happiness to people's lives because we are very busy with work, and sometimes listening to a song can make us feel relaxed.

'Lots of of hapiness' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of happiness'. 'People life' should be 'people's lives'. 'Becauses' is misspelled 'because'. 'Very a fooled with work pager' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'very busy with work'. 'Listening a song' needs 'to'. 'Can feel relaxed' should be 'can make us feel relaxed'.