Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。例如，可以直接表达不喜欢唱歌的原因，并说明具体情境。

例: I don't like singing because I'm not confident about my voice. Sometimes, I feel nervous when I sing in front of others, so I prefer singing alone, like when I'm taking a shower.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接说明学唱歌的经历和获得的证书。

例: Yes, I learned singing in primary school. I even got a music certificate after passing an exam, which made me very proud.

提案: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，建议先明确回答对象，再说明原因，使用连贯的句子表达。

例: I usually sing for my friends because they enjoy singing and encourage me. Sometimes, I also sing songs I like to them to share my favorite music.

提案: 回答中表达不清且有语法错误，建议用简单句表达观点，并举例说明唱歌或听歌如何带来快乐。

例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy. When I feel sad, I listen to my favorite songs, and it always cheers me up.

× Actually I don't like singing because I'm not very confident with my voice and sometimes I feel never when I when I sing in front of others.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing because I'm not very confident with my voice and sometimes I feel nervous when I sing in front of others.

句中使用了错误的代词“never”，应为形容词“nervous”表示紧张的感觉。

× So I prefer to suggest the alone or with I taking showers.

✓ So I prefer to sing alone or while taking showers.

句中“suggest the alone or with I taking showers”结构混乱，代词使用错误，应改为“sing alone or while taking showers”，表达更清晰。

× Yeah, I used to nurse Annie in my primary school.

✓ Yeah, I used to learn singing in my primary school.

“nurse Annie”无意义，可能是发音或拼写错误，应为“learn singing”表示学习唱歌。

× I got a music license and I think that is quite proud of me because I got a certification because after I passing an exam.

✓ I got a music license and I am quite proud of myself because I got a certification after passing an exam.

“that is quite proud of me”结构错误，主语和宾语混淆，应为“I am quite proud of myself”。“after I passing”时态错误，应为“after passing”。

× I always sing for my friends because he is really, really fair of singing and I will encourage me too.

✓ I always sing for my friends because they really like singing and they encourage me too.

“he is really, really fair of singing”代词错误且表达不当，应为“they really like singing”。“I will encourage me”错误，应为“they encourage me”。

× I'm sending you know, and sometimes I will sing some since I'm songs I like to him and I wanted to introduct.

✓ I'm singing, you know, and sometimes I will sing some songs I like to him and I want to introduce them.

句子结构混乱，代词使用错误，“sending”应为“singing”，“since I'm songs”无意义，应为“some songs I like”，“wanted to introduct”应为“want to introduce”。

× Yeah, I absolutely believe that sometimes when I felt upside, I always listen to some certain sums I favor with my favorites.

✓ Yeah, I absolutely believe that sometimes when I feel upset, I always listen to some certain songs I favor, my favorites.

“felt upside”错误，应为“feel upset”。“sums”拼写错误，应为“songs”。

× And you know, if you are so upside learning, learning some songs met be useless for about you, but you can try to.

✓ And you know, if you are so upset, learning some songs may be useful for you, but you can try it.

“so upside learning”错误，应为“so upset”。“met be useless for about you”表达错误，应为“may be useful for you”。