Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion about whether you like singing and explain why. Use complete sentences and avoid unrelated information.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

提案: Your response is confusing and does not clearly answer the question. Provide a direct answer and add some details about your experience or lack thereof with singing lessons.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I enjoy singing casually at home.

提案: Your answer is short and somewhat unclear. Try to give a complete sentence and add a reason or context to make your answer more natural and informative.

例: I want to sing for my girlfriend because it makes her happy and shows my affection.

提案: Your answer is on the right track but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and providing specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid grammatical errors.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their feelings and connect with others emotionally.

× I know because my son is not good.

✓ I don't know because my son is not good at singing.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. The phrase 'I know because my son is not good' is incomplete and confusing. Adding 'I don't know' clarifies the meaning, and specifying 'at singing' completes the thought. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Oh no. Aye. And don't. And then how to sing?

✓ Oh no. No, I haven't. I don't know how to sing.

The original response is fragmented and unclear. 'Aye' and 'And don't' do not form a coherent sentence. The corrected version provides a clear negative response and states the lack of knowledge about singing, improving sentence structure and coherence.

× I want to sing for a. My girlfriend.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend.

The original sentence is split incorrectly, causing confusion. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Yes. I think singing can make people happy because its effects on emotion of people.

✓ Yes. I think singing can make people happy because of its effects on people's emotions.

The original sentence misuses the pronoun 'its' without a clear antecedent and awkwardly phrases 'emotion of people.' The correction uses 'its' correctly referring to singing and changes 'emotion of people' to 'people's emotions' for natural and grammatically correct expression.