Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. For example, say "I don't like singing because I feel shy and lack confidence when I sing in front of others."

例: No, I don't like singing because I feel shy and lack confidence when I sing in front of others.

提案: Your answer is quite repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, "No, I haven't learned to sing because I don't enjoy it. However, I love listening to music as it helps me relax."

例: No, I haven't learned to sing because I don't enjoy it. However, I love listening to music as it helps me relax.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Focus on answering the question directly with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, use correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, "I would like to sing for my family and friends because they support me."

例: I would like to sing for my family and friends because they support me.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, "Yes, singing can bring happiness because it is a favourite pastime for many people and helps them to relax."

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it is a favourite pastime for many people and helps them to relax.

× No I don't like sing Jingle becauses I feel shy van I when I sing in front of others and I am not confident on my singing abilities.

✓ No, I don't like singing jingles because I feel shy when I sing in front of others and I am not confident about my singing abilities.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' not the base form 'sing'. Also, 'jingle' should be plural 'jingles' if referring to multiple songs. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Van I' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Confident on' should be 'confident about'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't like singing.

✓ No, I haven't learnt how to sing because I don't like singing.

In British English, the past participle of 'learn' is often 'learnt' rather than 'learned'. Since the context is a speaking test likely in India, 'learnt' is preferred. This correction aligns with regional usage.

× I'll love to listen here listen the music because it helps to make relax and I don't like singing with 'cause it.

✓ I love to listen to music here because it helps me relax and I don't like singing because of that.

'I'll love' is incorrect; 'I love' is appropriate for present preference. 'Listen here listen the music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music here'. 'Helps to make relax' should be 'helps me relax'. 'I don't like singing with 'cause it' is unclear and corrected to 'I don't like singing because of that' for clarity.

× I don't feel comfort table when I sing in front of others.

✓ I don't feel comfortable when I sing in front of others.

'Comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. This correction fixes the adjective form to properly describe the feeling.

× Many popular singles are there in never economy, so I think that they should be given a chance to sing.

✓ Many popular singers are there in our economy, so I think that they should be given a chance to sing.

'Singles' is incorrect; the intended word is 'singers' meaning people who sing. 'Never economy' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'our economy'. These corrections fix noun choice and possessive pronoun for clarity.

× And four, in my locality there are many people who sings well and I want them to sync.

✓ And for, in my locality there are many people who sing well and I want them to sing.

'Four' should be 'for' as a preposition. 'Who sings' is incorrect because 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'sing'. 'Sync' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'sing'. These corrections fix preposition, subject-verb agreement, and word choice.

× Yes, in game can be helpful for some people to make them happy becauses for some people it is a favorite past time for them and it helps them to become relax.

✓ Yes, singing can be helpful for some people to make them happy because for some people it is a favorite pastime and it helps them to relax.

'In game' is incorrect; likely meant 'singing'. 'Becauses' is misspelled 'because'. 'Past time' should be one word 'pastime'. 'Become relax' should be 'relax'. These corrections improve sentence structure, spelling, and word choice for clarity.