Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免拼写错误（如'son singing'应为'song singing'或'singing'），并且回答可以更自然流畅。可以增加更多细节来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I really love singing. When I was about 10 years old, I took singing classes, which sparked my interest in music.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误（如'son singing'），时态使用不当（makes应为made），建议使用更准确的表达，并且回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. I used to attend singing classes after school, which made me very happy.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰（如'saying by myself'和'send to others'），建议使用正确的句子结构和词汇，表达更自然。

例: I usually sing by myself because I feel embarrassed to sing in front of others.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误（如'hapiness'），时态不一致，建议使用正确的时态和拼写，并且表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, of course. I really enjoy watching singers perform on TV. I watch almost every singing show because it brings me a lot of happiness.

× I took son singing classes and I got very interested in that.

✓ I took some singing classes and I got very interested in that.

这里'son'是拼写错误，应该是'some'，表示一些。'son'是'儿子'的意思，和句意不符。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，'learned'是美式英语。根据上下文，建议统一使用美式英语'learned'。

× I always took son singing classes after school which makes me very happy.

✓ I always took some singing classes after school which made me very happy.

同样'son'应为'some'。另外，前半句是过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，'makes'改为'made'。

× Nobody I always saying by myself because I always felt embarrassed when I send to others.

✓ Nobody. I always sing by myself because I always feel embarrassed when I sing to others.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词。'saying'应为'sing'，'send'应为'sing'。时态应保持一致，'felt'改为'feel'。

× I really love to listen the singer singing on TV.

✓ I really love to listen to the singer singing on TV.

动词'listen'后应接介词'to'，表示倾听某人或某物。缺少'to'导致介词使用错误。

× I watched almost every TV show about singing because I think it brings me lots of hapiness.

✓ I watch almost every TV show about singing because I think it brings me lots of happiness.

前半句用过去时'watched'，后半句用现在时'think'，时态不一致。根据上下文，表达习惯应使用现在时'watch'。另外，'hapiness'拼写错误，应为'happiness'。