Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. My mother took me to singing classes when I was young, so I have learned to enjoy it a lot.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời cung cấp thông tin cụ thể về việc học hát của bạn.

例: Yes, I started learning to sing when I was about seven years old. My mother took me to singing classes where teachers helped me improve my voice.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nghĩa nhưng bị ngắt quãng và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các câu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy diễn đạt rõ ràng lý do bạn muốn hát cho mẹ.

例: I want to sing for my mother because she is the most important person in my life. She has always supported me, so singing for her would be a special gift.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because listening to music helps people relax and feel joyful. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I always feel happier.

× My mom take me to go to the singing class, so I sing very well and I very like tulips in many singers singing and it helped me to relax and make me happy.

✓ My mom takes me to go to the singing class, so I sing very well and I really like tulips in many singers' singing and it helps me to relax and makes me happy.

The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'My mom'. Also, 'I very like' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like' to properly express liking. 'It helped' should be 'it helps' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Make me happy' should be 'makes me happy' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes. My when I was about 7 years old my mom take me to the sink racist and they teach me how to sing well an eye. Worst teacher and I worked out how to about the. In.

✓ Yes. When I was about 7 years old, my mom took me to the singing class and they taught me how to sing well. The teacher was strict and I worked out how to sing properly.

The verb 'take' should be in past tense 'took' to match the past time frame. 'Teach' should be 'taught' for past tense. The sentence was unclear and fragmented; it was corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Worst teacher' was changed to 'The teacher was strict' to make sense. 'Worked out how to about the. In.' was corrected to 'worked out how to sing properly.'

× I want to sing for my mom because she is the greatest woman in my life and she is the. People who take me to the same classes. So I'm very want to sing for my mom as a present. I take for her because she do everything for me.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she is the greatest woman in my life and she is the person who takes me to the same classes. So I really want to sing for my mom as a present. I do it for her because she does everything for me.

'Take' should be 'takes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. 'I'm very want' is incorrect; it should be 'I really want'. 'I take for her' is unclear and corrected to 'I do it for her'. 'She do' should be 'she does' to agree with the third person singular subject.

× Yes, of course. I think seeing can bring happiness to people because when they listening to music they can relax and feel happy. For example when I said I'm start a song that make me feel happy so.

✓ Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they listen to music they can relax and feel happy. For example, when I sing a song, it makes me feel happy.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' to match the context. 'They listening' should be 'they listen' to use the correct verb form. 'When I said I'm start a song' is incorrect and changed to 'when I sing a song'. 'That make me feel happy' should be 'it makes me feel happy' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.