Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and directly responds to the question, which is good. However, it is a bit short and could be more effective by adding a reason or example to explain why you love singing. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'bathroom singer' without explanation, as it might confuse the examiner. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, I often sing my favourite songs when I am alone at home, which makes me feel happy and refreshed.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'learned about to sing' and 'learn about singing'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I would love to if I get the chance. Moreover, I am interested in learning lyrical singing and music composition to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but the two sentences could be combined for better flow. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas and avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'As'. Also, try to add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

例: I want to sing for my girlfriend because she is very close to my heart, and I would like to perform a romantic song to express my feelings for her.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions, such as 'singing provides us up' and 'mood refreshing things'. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific supporting details.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people's lives because it helps to relieve stress and improve mood. For instance, singing can provide relaxation and make people feel more cheerful and energetic.

× No I haven't learned about to sing sadly, but if I get a chance I would definitely learn about singing and I also want to learn about the lyrical singing and composition.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing sadly, but if I get a chance I would definitely learn singing and I also want to learn lyrical singing and composition.

The phrase 'learned about to sing' is incorrect because 'learn' is followed by 'how to' plus the base verb, not 'about to'. Also, 'learn about singing' is better expressed as 'learn singing' when referring to acquiring the skill. Additionally, 'the lyrical singing' should be 'lyrical singing' without 'the' as it is a general activity.

× Yes, singing can bring happiness to people's life as singing provides us up.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people's lives as singing lifts us up.

The phrase 'people's life' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and should be followed by the plural noun 'lives'. Also, 'provides us up' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lifts us up' to express uplifting mood.

× Singing provides relaxation, hapiness and many other mood refreshing things.

✓ Singing provides relaxation, happiness, and many other mood-refreshing things.

The word 'hapiness' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'happiness'. Also, 'mood refreshing' should be hyphenated as 'mood-refreshing' to correctly modify 'things'.