Singing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like singing? Why?
受験者
Yes, I like singing in my free time. I always sing a little times because I think it can release my pressure.
試験官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
受験者
Yes, when I was in school I often attendant music class. Causes. And I learned how to sing different songs. I really enjoy to sing pop music becauses it can improve my senior.
試験官
Who do you want to sing for?
受験者
I want to sing for my friends because we often spend a lot of time together, so I want to sing for them 'cause it can. And strengthen our relationships.
試験官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
受験者
Yes. Sometimes people singing funny. Song is can make people laugh and happy.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复和语法错误。可以用更地道的短语表达喜欢唱歌的原因。
例: Yes, I enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax and relieve stress.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整句子并清楚表达学习唱歌的经历和喜好。
例: Yes, I attended music classes at school where I learned to sing various songs. I especially enjoy singing pop music because it improves my mood.
Who do you want to sing for?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答不完整且表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更流畅，具体说明唱歌的目的。
例: I want to sing for my friends because we spend a lot of time together, and singing for them can help strengthen our friendship.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议用完整句子表达观点，并举例说明唱歌如何带来快乐。
例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because funny songs can make people laugh and feel joyful.
文法
× I always sing a little times because I think it can release my pressure.
✓ I always sing a few times because I think it can release my pressure.
这里的“a little times”是错误的，times是可数名词，应该用“a few times”表示“几次”。“a little”用于不可数名词。
× Yes, when I was in school I often attendant music class.
✓ Yes, when I was in school I often attended music class.
“attendant”是名词或形容词，动词过去式应该用“attended”。这里需要用过去式表示过去经常做的动作。
× Causes.
✓ Because.
“Causes”是名词，句中应使用连词“Because”表示原因。
× I really enjoy to sing pop music becauses it can improve my senior.
✓ I really enjoy singing pop music because it can improve my mood.
“enjoy”后应接动名词“singing”，而不是不定式“to sing”。“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。“improve my senior”表达不清，推测应为“improve my mood”（改善心情）。
× I want to sing for my friends because we often spend a lot of time together, so I want to sing for them 'cause it can. And strengthen our relationships.
✓ I want to sing for my friends because we often spend a lot of time together, so I want to sing for them because it can strengthen our relationships.
句子中“'cause it can.”后断句不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。
× Yes. Sometimes people singing funny.
✓ Yes. Sometimes people sing funny songs.
“people singing funny”结构不完整，缺少谓语动词和宾语，改为“people sing funny songs”更完整。
× Song is can make people laugh and happy.
✓ Songs can make people laugh and feel happy.
“Song is can”结构错误，应去掉“is”，并且“happy”前加“feel”使表达更自然。
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