Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有一些语法和词汇错误，比如将'singing'误说成'seeing'，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音和词汇的准确使用，同时避免冗余，保持回答简洁自然。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me stay active and happy. I enjoy songs by Taylor Swift because they are very positive. Usually, I sing with my friends or alone, although I'm not very good at it.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如'returned any like practical classes about saying'不符合英语表达习惯。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

例: To be honest, I have never taken formal singing classes. However, in primary and high school, we had music lessons where the teacher encouraged us to sing together and practice different sounds.

提案: 回答中表达的意思较为模糊，部分词汇使用不当，如'courage Minton'。建议使用更准确的词汇表达情感，并且注意句子连贯性和逻辑性。

例: I want to sing for my family and friends because singing is a way to show my care and love for them. They have always supported me during difficult times, so I am happy to sing for them.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，如'sum'应为'song'，表达不够清晰。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构的练习，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. The lyrics and rhythms of songs can encourage people and lift their spirits. Also, singing allows people to express themselves, which helps improve their mood throughout the day.

× Oh yes, I like seeing because I think you can help me to keep active and keep happy.

✓ Oh yes, I like singing because I think it can help me to keep active and happy.

这里的动词应该是动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事，'seeing' 应改为 'singing'。另外，'you' 指代不明确，改为 'it' 更合适。

× they're very active positive

✓ they're very active and positive

形容词之间需要用连词 'and' 连接，不能直接并列。

× I already just sing together with my friends or when I was alone because I'm not really good at it to be honest.

✓ I usually just sing together with my friends or when I am alone because I'm not really good at it to be honest.

这里时态不一致，'already' 用法不当，且 'sing' 应用一般现在时表示习惯动作，'was' 改为 'am' 保持时态一致。

× I haven't returned any like practical classes about saying

✓ I haven't taken any practical classes about singing

'returned' 用错，应该用 'taken' 表示参加课程；'saying' 应为 'singing'。

× we have some classes in our schools that the teacher will light us to sing together and practice some sounds.

✓ we have some classes in our schools where the teacher will lead us to sing together and practice some sounds.

'light' 用错，正确动词是 'lead'，表示引导。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

动词 'sing' 后面通常用介词 'to' 表示对象，而不是 'for'。

× because I think singing is also a way to show like you courage Minton for others and you care for others and you love others as well.

✓ because I think singing is also a way to show your courage and care for others and love others as well.

'you courage Minton' 语法错误，应为 'your courage and care'，且 'like' 用法不当，应去掉。

× And my families and my friends, they always help me when I was in trouble and I'm really willing to sing for them.

✓ And my family and my friends, they always help me when I am in trouble and I'm really willing to sing for them.

'families' 应为单数 'family'，表示家庭成员；时态保持一致，'was' 改为 'am'。

× the lyrics and rhythms of the sum can really have the first to encourage people and leave them up

✓ the lyrics and rhythms of the song can really encourage people and lift them up

'sum' 应为 'song'；'have the first to encourage' 结构错误，应改为 'encourage'；'leave them up' 应为 'lift them up'。

× on the other hand own thing is a way to let people to speak out

✓ on the other hand, singing is a way to let people speak out

'own thing' 用词错误，应为 'singing'；'let people to speak' 中 'to' 不应出现，正确用法是 'let people speak'。

× and I think that really helps them to like have a good mood for the day life.

✓ and I think that really helps them to have a good mood for daily life.

'like have' 中 'like' 不应出现；'day life' 应为 'daily life'。