Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在多处语法错误和拼写错误，如“saying”应为“singing”，“sons”应为“songs”。建议你注意单词拼写和基本语法，避免重复表达，同时回答应更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I like singing because it is an interesting activity for me. I sing songs every week, sometimes even every day.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子不完整且有拼写错误，如“joy quired”应为“enjoyed learning”或“have been learning”。建议练习完整句子表达，并注意时态和拼写。

例: Yes, I have been learning how to sing for four years. I practice singing every day.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“reply then somethings”应为“repay them somehow”，“teached”应为“taught”。建议使用连贯的句子表达完整意思，并注意词汇的正确使用。

例: I like to sing for my parents and my teachers because they have nurtured and taught me a lot. Singing is my way to show gratitude to them.

提案: 回答中多次将“singing”误写为“saying”，且语法错误较多。建议注意单词拼写，使用正确的动词形式，并尝试用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, beautiful singing can bring happiness to people. It can help them release stress and unwind.

× Sing is a interesting activities for me.

✓ Singing is an interesting activity for me.

这里'sing'应改为动名词'singing'表示动作，'a'应改为'an'因为后面单词以元音音素开头，'activities'应改为单数'activity'因为前面有不定冠词，整体表达单数概念。

× Every week or even every days, I saying sons.

✓ Every week or even every day, I sing songs.

'days'应为单数'day'与'every'搭配，'saying'应改为动词原形'sing'，'sons'应为'songs'，表示歌曲。

× Yes, I have joy quired for four years.

✓ Yes, I have enjoyed singing for four years.

原句拼写错误，'joy quired'应为' enjoyed singing'，表示过去持续到现在的动作，使用现在完成时。

× I'm. Practice by saying. Sing. Every day.

✓ I practice singing every day.

原句断句错误，'practice'后应接动名词'singing'，且句子应连贯表达。

× So I want to reply then somethings.

✓ So I want to reply to them with something.

'then'应为'them'指代父母，'somethings'应为不可数名词'something'，且'reply'后需加介词'to'。

× my teachers also teached me a lot.

✓ my teachers also taught me a lot.

'teached'是错误的过去式，正确过去式为'taught'。

× Yes, a beautiful saying can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, a beautiful song can bring happiness to people.

'saying'意为谚语，语境应为'song'歌曲。

× Saying can helps people too.

✓ Singing can help people too.

主语'singing'为单数，谓语动词应用原形'help'，去掉's'。

× Release their stress an unwind.

✓ Release their stress and unwind.

'an'应为连词'and'，连接两个动作。