Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰，建议加强基础语法和词汇的学习，尤其是动词形式和发音相关词汇的正确使用。同时，回答应更直接地回应问题，避免重复和不相关内容。

例: No, I don't like singing because I can't control my voice or keep the rhythm well. However, I enjoy listening to music very much.

提案: 回答中存在大量语法错误和表达混乱，建议练习简单句的构造和时态使用，确保表达清晰。同时，回答应紧扣问题，避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I have learned singing in school music lessons. Although I am not very good at it, I still enjoy learning.

提案: 回答内容较为混乱，建议在回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体例子支持，避免语句不连贯。

例: I don't have a specific person to sing for, but I would like to sing for my parents on their birthdays. Also, I might sing for myself when I achieve something good.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体原因或例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps people relax.

× Sorry I don't like staying but I like her listen music.

✓ Sorry, I don't like singing but I like listening to music.

句中使用了错误的代词“her”，应使用动名词形式“listening”并加介词“to”构成正确短语“listening to music”。

× I always can't control my. Voice or the temple?

✓ I always can't control my voice or the tempo.

“my.”后面断句不当，应连贯表达“my voice”，且“temple”应为“tempo”，表示节奏。

× So I don't get the temple very well, so I can't think.

✓ So I don't get the tempo very well, so I can't think.

同上，“temple”应为“tempo”，且句子结构需连贯。

× Oh, that's how to stay.

✓ Oh, that's how to sing.

“stay”用错，应为“sing”，符合语境。

× I'm a not a good student I think, emailed Emily Music so I still count thing.

✓ I'm not a good student, I think. I studied music, so I still can't sing well.

句中“emailed Emily Music”无意义，应为“studied music”；“count thing”应为“can't sing”。

× I don't think there is a. So particular people, maybe one night a week or one night.

✓ I don't think there is any particular person, maybe one night a week or one night.

“a. So particular people”结构错误，应为“any particular person”。

× Well it was my parents birthday.

✓ Well, it is my parents' birthday.

时态应为现在时，且“parents”所有格应加撇号。

× I would like to sing for them and when I have done very good work I would assume for myself.

✓ I would like to sing for them, and when I have done very good work, I would sing for myself.

“assume”用错，应为“sing”；句子需加逗号分隔。

× Yes, it is. I'm very. Sure that it again how bring happy to every people even from meal like me some people counting I think it is a temple or reason or the. Atmosphere.

✓ Yes, it is. I'm very sure that it can bring happiness to everyone, even people like me who can't sing well. I think it is the tempo or reason or the atmosphere, something like that.

句子结构混乱，需调整为正确表达；“meal”应为“me”，“counting”应为“can't sing”；“temple”应为“tempo”；“bring happy”应为“bring happiness”。