Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有发音错误（"seeing" 应为 "singing"），并且表达不够自然。建议注意发音准确，同时回答时直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I like singing because I enjoy listening to music and watching live bands. Singing is one of my favorite hobbies.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题（如"major dying playing"不明确），建议简洁明了地表达没有正式学过唱歌的原因，并避免语法错误。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am not a music major and I don't have enough time to learn formally, so I just sing by myself.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误（如"seeing"应为"singing"，"a gifted"应为"a gift"），建议注意用词准确，句子结构清晰，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I want to sing for my parents because they worked hard to raise me, so singing for them would be a special gift. Also, I want to sing for my girlfriend because I love her very much.

提案: 回答中有发音和拼写错误（"you're seeing"应为"singing"，"borrowed"应为"bored"），表达不够流畅。建议注意发音和拼写，使用更自然的表达，并且句子结构更完整。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel bored or unhappy, I go to karaoke with my friends, and singing always makes me feel happy and energetic.

× Yes, I like seeing because I like to listen to music and watch some music bands.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I like to listen to music and watch some music bands.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的-ing形式。这里'seeing'应改为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌的。

× So saying is well my interest.

✓ So singing is also my interest.

动词的-ing形式用来表示兴趣或爱好，'saying'应改为'singing'，且表达更自然应使用'also'表示'也'。

× No, I haven't ever learned how to sing because I'm not a major dying playing and I don't have enough time to study how to sing so I just to sing by myself.

✓ No, I haven't ever learned how to sing because I'm not a music major and I don't have enough time to study how to sing, so I just sing by myself.

'major dying playing'是错误表达，应为'music major'。此外，'just to sing'应改为'just sing'，因为动词后不需要不定式。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

该句无语法错误，符合英语习惯。

× I want to sing for my parents because I think they are very hard to raise me up so seeing for them maybe a gifted to them and I also want to sing for my girlfriend because I really love her.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because I think they worked very hard to raise me, so singing for them may be a gift to them. I also want to sing for my girlfriend because I really love her.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'very hard to raise me up'表达不当，应改为'worked very hard to raise me'。'maybe a gifted to them'应改为'may be a gift to them'。

× Yes, I think you're seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

'you're seeing'是错误表达，应为'singing'，动名词形式表示一般事实。

× For example, if I feel borrowed or unhappy I will go to KDB with my friends and singing can make me feel happy and for energy.

✓ For example, if I feel bored or unhappy, I will go to KTV with my friends, and singing can make me feel happy and energetic.

'borrowed'应为'bored'，'KDB'应为'KTV'，'for energy'应改为'energetic'，形容词形式更合适。