Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够连贯，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议你用完整的句子表达观点，避免断断续续的表达，同时增加具体细节来支持你的观点。

例: No, I don't like singing because I have never been good at it. When I was young, my music teacher told me that I lacked talent, which made me lose confidence.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达学习经历和感受，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have learned how to sing. However, I found it difficult to understand the teacher's instructions, so I did not perform well during practice.

提案: 表达情感时用词不准确，句子不完整。建议用更准确的词汇表达感情，并用完整句子描述原因。

例: I would like to sing for my mother because she has given me a lot of love and support, which makes me feel very warm and appreciated.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. When someone sings, it gives me a warm feeling and makes me very happy. However, I am not sure if my singing can have the same effect on others.

× No, I don't like singing because I think I don't have talent in singing when I was young.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I think I didn't have talent in singing when I was young.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态'didn't have'，而不是现在时态'don't have'。

× The music teacher. Say. I. Say something bad for me. So it's a bad.

✓ The music teacher said something bad about me, so it was bad.

原句断句不完整且语序混乱，应该合并成完整句子，使用过去时'said'，并且用'about me'表达对某人的评价。

× The music teacher have told me how to sing buts.

✓ The music teacher has told me how to sing, but

主语是单数'the music teacher'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'has'，而不是'have'。

× The music teacher have told me how to sing buts.

✓ The music teacher has told me how to sing, but

'buts'是错误的连词形式，正确的连词是'but'。

× I'm a little bit full.

✓ I'm a little bit confused.

'full'意思是'满的'，与语境不符，应该用'confused'表示'困惑'。

× I don't understand what she's talking about.

✓ I don't understand what she's talking about.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× And when the practice starts? I. Perform bad.

✓ And when the practice started, I performed badly.

这里描述过去的情况，应该用过去时'started'和'performed'，'bad'应改为副词'badly'修饰动词。

× Oh. Maybe it's my mother.

✓ Oh, maybe it's my mother.

句子中断句不自然，改为逗号连接更流畅。

× I want to appreciate it for she burns me up and she gave me a lot of love and made me feel.

✓ I want to appreciate her because she supports me and she gave me a lot of love and made me feel

'appreciate it for'用法错误，应该用'appreciate her because'，'burns me up'表达不当，改为'supports me'更合适。

× So appreciated. And warm.

✓ so appreciated and warm.

断句不完整，应合并为一句完整表达。

× Somebody saying will give me a. Warm feeling.

✓ Somebody singing will give me a warm feeling.

'saying'应为'singing'，符合上下文语境。

× And it make me. Feel very happy.

✓ And it makes me feel very happy.

主语是单数'it'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× However. I'm not sure what I'm saying would give other.

✓ However, I'm not sure if what I'm singing would give others happiness.

句子不完整且表达不清，补充完整并调整语序使其通顺。