Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在较多语法和词汇错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意时态的正确使用，避免重复和冗余，同时使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I didn't like singing in the past because I wasn't good at it and often made mistakes. However, now I find singing relaxing and enjoyable.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子结构，直接回答问题，并提供具体原因。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I wasn't good at it as a child and only sang for fun.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，词汇使用不当，建议先明确回答问题，然后用连贯的句子解释原因。

例: I usually sing for myself because when I hear an impressive song, I feel inspired to sing along.

提案: 回答中有多处发音和拼写错误，影响理解。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，表达观点时注意逻辑连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing together creates a strong sense of enjoyment and helps to relax and relieve stress. That's why I enjoy participating in group singing activities.

× In the past time I don't like seeing because I'm not good at it and I'm sometime on going wrong with the tongue.

✓ In the past, I didn't like singing because I wasn't good at it and sometimes I would get my tongue wrong.

这里时态使用错误，描述过去的情况应使用过去时态。"don't like"应改为"didn't like"，"I'm sometime on going wrong"表达不正确，应改为"sometimes I would get my tongue wrong"。

× In the past time I don't like seeing because I'm not good at it and I'm sometime on going wrong with the tongue.

✓ In the past, I didn't like singing because I wasn't good at it and sometimes I would get my tongue wrong.

"seeing"应为"singing"，这是词汇错误，属于代词/词汇使用错误。

× But now I think it is a way of relax so I enjoy seeing.

✓ But now I think it is a way to relax so I enjoy singing.

"a way of relax"应为"a way to relax"，动词不定式用法更合适。"seeing"应为"singing"。

× But now I think it is a way of relax so I enjoy seeing. In the Kitty way.

✓ But now I think it is a way to relax so I enjoy singing, in my own way.

"In the Kitty way"表达不清，应改为"in my own way"更符合语境。

× No, I'm never going to have a lesson to learn how to see because you know, in my childhood I don't good at it and often seeing out of the twins and so I never learn it just for fun.

✓ No, I have never had a lesson to learn how to sing because, you know, in my childhood I wasn't good at it and often sang out of tune, so I never learned it, just for fun.

时态错误，描述过去经历应使用过去时态。"I'm never going to have"应改为"I have never had"，"I don't good at it"应改为"I wasn't good at it"，"seeing out of the twins"应为"sang out of tune"，"never learn"应为"never learned"。

× No, I'm never going to have a lesson to learn how to see because you know, in my childhood I don't good at it and often seeing out of the twins and so I never learn it just for fun.

✓ No, I have never had a lesson to learn how to sing because, you know, in my childhood I wasn't good at it and often sang out of tune, so I never learned it, just for fun.

"see"应为"sing"，"seeing out of the twins"应为"sang out of tune"，词汇使用错误。

× Nobody. I want to sing for our jets, saying for myself, because you know when you listen, very. Impressive song, you just want to sing with her. Wister song, you know.

✓ Nobody. I want to sing for myself because, you know, when you listen to a very impressive song, you just want to sing along with it. A wistful song, you know.

"our jets"应为"myself"，"saying"应为"singing"，"when you listen, very. Impressive song"语序和表达错误，应改为"when you listen to a very impressive song"，"sing with her"应为"sing along with it"，"Wister song"应为"wistful song"。

× Yes, I believe saying can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

"saying"应为"singing"，词汇错误。

× When we were seen together, it creates a strong sense of you need to enjoy.

✓ When we sing together, it creates a strong sense of unity and enjoyment.

"were seen"应为"sing"，时态和词汇错误。

× When we were seen together, it creates a strong sense of you need to enjoy.

✓ When we sing together, it creates a strong sense of unity and enjoyment.

"you need to enjoy"表达不清，应改为"unity and enjoyment"更符合语境。

× Seeing is also a great way to relax and relieve stress.

✓ Singing is also a great way to relax and relieve stress.

"Seeing"应为"Singing"，词汇错误。

× So I'm really enjoying doing group St. activities.

✓ So I'm really enjoying doing group singing activities.

"group St. activities"表达不清，应为"group singing activities"，词汇错误。