Chocolate— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议使用正确的动词形式和更自然的表达方式，如用"I don't like eating chocolate because I find its taste unpleasant."

例: I don't like eating chocolate because I find its taste too sweet and a bit bitter for my liking.

提案: 回答简洁但缺乏细节。建议增加具体频率和原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I rarely eat chocolate, maybe once a month, because I think it tastes too sweet for me.

提案: 回答中时态和表达不准确，建议使用过去时态并更清晰地表达原因。

例: No, I didn't eat chocolate often as a kid because it was too expensive, so I usually ate candy instead.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题并给出具体原因。

例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and can be used in many desserts.

提案: 回答表达混乱且信息不足。建议明确表达自己喜欢或不喜欢的口味，并提供具体描述。

例: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate because it is creamy and sweet.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的句子结构并补充原因。

例: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift, especially on romantic occasions, because it shows affection and is widely appreciated.

× I don't like eat chocolate because chocolate has the taste of disgusting.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate because chocolate tastes disgusting.

动词like后面应接动名词形式（-ing），而不是动词原形。句中应使用"like eating"而非"like eat"。

× I don't like eat chocolate because chocolate has the taste of disgusting.

✓ I don't like eating chocolate because chocolate tastes disgusting.

"disgusting"是形容词，不能用作名词。表达味道时应说"chocolate tastes disgusting"，而不是"has the taste of disgusting"。

× No, I think I was born to hate chocolate because chocolate is too expensive when I was a kid.

✓ No, I think I was born to hate chocolate because chocolate was too expensive when I was a kid.

描述过去的情况时，动词时态应为过去时，"is"应改为"was"。

× I think the main reason is that people who indeed love it, but I'm not sure why it's popular around the world.

✓ I think the main reason is that people indeed love it, but I'm not sure why it's popular around the world.

句子结构不完整，"people who indeed love it"缺少谓语，去掉"who"使句子完整。

× Actually, I didn't know about the chocolate.

✓ Actually, I don't know about chocolate.

根据上下文，表达现在的状态应使用现在时，"didn't know"改为"don't know"。

× Actually, I didn't know about the chocolate. I only know the chocolate has the wine taste.

✓ Actually, I don't know much about chocolate. I only know that chocolate has a wine taste.

"the wine taste"表达不自然，应加冠词"a"，并且"know about the chocolate"改为"know much about chocolate"更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, I think it's a good gift to others, but when our romantic date we often send the chocolate to our lover.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good gift for others, and on our romantic dates, we often give chocolate to our lover.

"gift to others"应为"gift for others"，表示赠送对象。"when our romantic date"表达不自然，应改为"on our romantic dates"。