Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 직접적으로 질문에 답하는 주제 문장을 먼저 말한 뒤, 구체적 이유와 예시를 하나 덧붙이세요. 연결어(For example, Recently, Because)로 문장을 매끄럽게 이어주고 시제·주어·동사 일치를 확인하세요.

例: Not really. Recently I've found it hard to remember small details. For example, I often can't recall what I ate the day before, which I blame on stress rather than age. Because of that, I try to write things down to avoid forgetting.

提案: 응답이 불분명하고 문법과 단어 선택이 많이 어색합니다. 구체적인 사건을 한 번에 명확히 설명하세요(무엇을, 언제, 어떻게 했는지). 연결어(For instance, Then, So)를 사용하고 과거시제를 일관되게 쓰세요.

例: Yes, I have. For instance, once I forgot my house keys and couldn't open the front door. I tried to remember where I had left them, but when I couldn't find them I called my mother and she brought a spare key.

提案: 문장이 반복적이고 어순과 문법이 부정확합니다. 먼저 주제문으로 핵심을 말하고, 구체적인 예시나 이유를 하나 덧붙이세요. 시간 표현은 'class start time'이나 'schedule' 같은 정확한 어휘를 사용하세요.

例: I need to remember my class start times so I don't arrive late. For example, I always check my schedule the night before and set reminders for the first lesson of the day.

提案: 전달은 되지만 중복 표현과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 한두 문장으로 깔끔하게 답을 시작하고, 알람 외의 방법(메모, calendar app)을 추가로 제시하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 연결어(Also, For example)를 사용하세요.

例: I usually set alarms on my phone to remind me of important tasks. For example, I have alarms for waking up, walking my dog and starting work, and I also use a calendar app for longer-term events.

× Sorry I'm not good at memorizing things recently.

✓ Sorry, I'm not good at memorizing things these days.

The adverb 'recently' pairs better with present perfect; 'these days' is appropriate with present simple to indicate a general current state. Also add a comma after 'Sorry' and contraction spacing. Suggestion: use 'these days' for habitual present situations.

× I usually don't remember what I eat yesterday.

✓ I usually don't remember what I ate yesterday.

The sentence contains a time marker 'yesterday', so the past simple ('ate') is required rather than present simple ('eat'). Suggestion: use past tense when mentioning specific past time expressions like 'yesterday'.

× I think it is because of my age, my brain get old.

✓ I think it's because of my age; my brain is getting old.

Subject-verb agreement and verb tense: 'brain' is third-person singular so use 'is', and 'getting' shows a progressive change. Also combine with a semicolon or conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: use 'is getting' to describe gradual change.

× Yes I have. I have experience that I forget my home door.

✓ Yes, I have. I have experienced forgetting my house key/door lock.

The phrase 'I have experience that I forget' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'have experienced' + gerund to report a past experience. Also 'home door' is unnatural; use 'house key' or 'front door'. Suggestion: say 'I have experienced forgetting my house key'.

× Number so I trying to remember that but it is hard so I called my mom and help.

✓ Once I couldn't get in, so I tried to remember the code, but it was hard, so I called my mom and she helped me.

Original lacks clear subject-verb forms and connectors. 'Trying' needs auxiliary 'was' or 'I tried'. Tenses should be consistent (past simple). 'And help' needs subject and past tense 'she helped me'. Suggestion: use clear past simple sequence: 'I tried... I called... she helped'.

× I usually need to remember the classes time starting time so I don't get late at classroom, so I tried too hard remember those things.

✓ I usually need to remember class start times so I don't arrive late to class, so I try very hard to remember those things.

Use 'class start times' or 'the start time of classes', 'arrive late to class' rather than 'get late at classroom'. Maintain present habit with present simple 'try'. 'Too hard remember' needs 'try very hard to remember'. Suggestion: use 'remember class start times' and 'arrive late to class'.

× I usually set an alarm so my phone have many has many alarms.

✓ I usually set alarms on my phone, so it has many alarms set.

Subject-verb agreement: 'phone' is singular so use 'has'. Remove redundant 'have many has many'. Use 'set alarms on my phone' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'I set alarms on my phone, so it has many alarms'.

× There's such things like it is wake up time or it is time to work with your dog like something.

✓ They are things like 'wake-up time' or 'time to walk the dog'.

'There's such things' is incorrect agreement; use 'There are such things' or 'They are things like'. Also 'work with your dog' is unnatural; use 'walk the dog'. Simplify structure and use hyphen in 'wake-up time'. Suggestion: say 'They are things like wake-up time or time to walk the dog'.