Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and repetition, and provide a coherent supporting detail. Mention one concrete example and ensure sentences are complete. Use linking words if adding details.

例: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things. For example, I can remember all the telephone numbers my friends give me and recall most of my classmates’ names. Because I repeat the information several times in my head, it becomes easier to remember.

提案: Respond directly and use correct tense and grammar. If you forgot something before, briefly describe the situation; if not, explain how you avoid forgetting important things with specific methods and linking words for clarity.

例: No, I have not forgotten anything really important because I write important tasks down. For instance, when I have an important appointment I add it to my phone calendar and set an alarm, so I don’t miss it.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence naming key daily items, then add one specific example with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect word order.

例: I need to remember many everyday things, such as friends’ phone numbers and directions to common places. For example, I memorise the route to the supermarket so I can get there quickly without checking my phone.

提案: Start with a clear statement of your main method, then give one or two specific, linked techniques and a brief reason why they work. Use correct verbs and pronouns and avoid general vagueness.

例: I usually remember important things by taking notes and setting reminders on my phone. For example, I write tasks in a notebook and create calendar alerts, which helps me stay organised and avoid forgetting deadlines.

× To be honest, I am good at memorizing things.

✓ To be honest, I am good at memorizing things.

No grammatical error matching the provided problem types; sentence is correct.

× I memorize all telephone numbers that my friend told me and I can easily remember each classmate's NA name and when I.

✓ I memorize all the telephone numbers that my friends told me, and I can easily remember each classmate's name and when I met them.

Errors: 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when referring to multiple people (singular and plural issue). 'NA name' is unclear — likely should be 'name'. The clause 'when I' is incomplete and needs completion like 'when I met them' (sentence structure error but fixed here). Suggestion: use plural when referring to multiple people, include articles where needed ('the telephone numbers'), and complete clauses with verbs and objects. Grammar problem type ID: 1.

× To be known as uh, I never forgotten something important.

✓ To be honest, I have never forgotten anything important.

Errors: 'To be known as' is incorrect phrase; correct is 'To be honest'. 'I never forgotten' is wrong because 'forgotten' is a past participle requiring an auxiliary; use present perfect 'have never forgotten' to express experience up to now. Also 'something important' is better as 'anything important' in negative context. Grammar problem type ID: 5.

× When I realized that something important, I will remember it on my take notes and on my on my on my phone like.

✓ When I realize something important, I will remember it by taking notes and by saving it on my phone.

Errors: 'When I realized that something important' mixes past tense 'realized' with a future 'will'; use present simple 'realize' for general condition or past if recounting a past event. 'I will remember it on my take notes' is ungrammatical—use 'by taking notes'. Repetition 'on my on my on my' is filler. 'like' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use correct verb forms for conditional/time clauses and correct gerund after 'by' for method expressions. Grammar problem type ID: 26.

× There are too many things that I must to remember in my daily life, such as my friend's telephone numbers and, uh, the roads that how can I go to somewhere?

✓ There are too many things that I must remember in my daily life, such as my friends' telephone numbers and the routes for how I can get somewhere.

Errors: 'must to remember' is wrong; 'must' is followed by the base verb 'remember' (modal verb structure) which here is covered by problem type 4 as well, but primary fix is preposition and article use. 'friend's' should be plural possessive 'friends'' if multiple friends. 'the roads that how can I go to somewhere' is ungrammatical—use 'routes for how I can get somewhere' or 'how to get somewhere'. Suggestion: remove extra 'to' after must and use clearer phrasing for directions. Grammar problem type ID: 11.

× There are too many ways that I can remember important things such as take notes and or tell somebody to remind you of something.

✓ There are many ways I can remember important things, such as taking notes or asking somebody to remind me of them.

Errors: after 'such as' use the -ing form 'taking notes' (gerund) instead of base 'take notes'. 'and or' is redundant—use 'or'. 'tell somebody to remind you' mixes pronouns; use consistent first person: 'asking somebody to remind me'. Also 'of something' is vague; 'of them' refers back to 'important things'. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'such as' and keep pronouns consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 8.