Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 总体较好，但存在语法和用词错误，表达不够自然。注意动词形式（e.g. 'easy' 应为 'easy to' 的被动结构或用 'find it easy to'），形容词使用（'memorable' 用错，应为 'memorising' 或 'remembering'），以及介词和冠词的省略。回答应有主题句并补充具体细节，用连接词使句子更流畅。可将句子控制在不超过5句。

例: Yes, I’m fairly good at remembering things. For example, I find it easy to remember numbers and important dates, and I can usually recall people’s names and faces without much effort.

提案: 答案内容能回应问题但语法和词汇错误影响理解。注意时态（'forget' 应为 'forgot'），名词所有格和词序（'my best friend's birthday'），以及短语使用（'take someone out to a special dinner'）。句子可更简洁并加入连接词说明结果。

例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend’s birthday and felt terrible. I apologized immediately and promised to make it up by taking them out to a special dinner.

提案: 回答覆盖要点但有语法和词汇错误。注意冠词使用（'the deadline of the project' 或 'project deadlines'），可数名词复数（'e-mails'），以及不定式搭配（'must to' 应为 'must' 或 'need to'）。建议加入连接词和具体例子（如工作、学校相关）以增强说服力。

例: I need to remember project deadlines and any important meetings. It's also crucial for me to reply to important e-mails and messages promptly, especially those related to work.

提案: 回答清晰且内容具体，但有少量语法和用词问题。注意冠词和复数（'alarms for tasks'，'calendar apps'），以及避免口头语“Uh”。可以用连接词说明步骤或优点，控制句子数并自然连贯。

例: I rely on my smartphone to remember important things. For example, I set reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I use calendar apps to keep track of important dates, which is very helpful.

× Yes, I'm pretty good at memorable things.

✓ Yes, I'm pretty good at memorising things.

原句用詞不當；“memorable”是形容詞，意為“令人難忘的”，不適合表達“擅長記憶”的能力。應使用動名詞或動詞短語“memorising things”或“memorizing things”來表示擅長記憶事物。建議學會區分形容詞與動名詞的用法。

× I can easy to remember numbers and dates.

✓ I can easily remember numbers and dates.

句中副詞使用錯誤。“easy”是形容詞，應修飾名詞；此處需修飾動詞“remember”，應用副詞“easily”。同時在情態動詞“can”後不應有“to”，結構為 “can + 動詞原形”。建議：情態動詞後直接用動詞原形，並用副詞修飾動詞。

× Also I can recall people's names and faces without efforts.

✓ Also I can recall people's names and faces without effort.

“effort”在此為不可數名詞，短語慣用“without effort”或“with no effort”。使用複數“efforts”不符合慣用搭配。建議記住一些固定搭配（without effort / with no effort）。

× Yes, I once forget my best friend birthday and I felt terrible about it so I apologized and promised to make it up by a taken out of a special dinner.

✓ Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday and I felt terrible about it, so I apologized and promised to make it up by taking her out for a special dinner.

多處錯誤：動詞時態錯用，“once forget”應為過去式“forgot”；“best friend birthday”缺少所有格，應為“best friend's birthday”；“a taken out of a special dinner”語序和形式錯誤，應用動名詞“taking”並表明賓語（her）和介詞短語“out for a special dinner”。建議注意過去敘述使用過去式，所有格及動名詞用法。

× I need to remember the deadline of project and any important meetings.

✓ I need to remember the deadline of the project and any important meetings.

“deadline of project”缺少冠詞，並且習慣用法通常為“deadline for the project”或“the project's deadline”。這裡至少需要定冠詞“the project”。建議注意名詞前的冠詞和常見介詞搭配（deadline for / the project's deadline）。

× It's also crucial for me to respond to important e-mail and messages.

✓ It's also crucial for me to respond to important emails and messages.

“e-mail”可以寫作“email”，且此處為可數複數，應使用“emails”。注意名詞複數形式與一致性。

× I must to make sure I can respond.

✓ I must make sure I can respond.

情態動詞“must”後不加“to”，應直接接動詞原形。原句多餘“to”。建議熟記各情態動詞後接動詞原形的規則。

× I use my smartphone to remember important things.

✓ I use my smartphone to remember important things.

此句語法上可接受，但為了更自然可改為“I use my smartphone to help me remember important things.” 若僅依據列表，句子無需修改。說明：原句結構正確，僅給出可選的更自然表達。

× Uh, for example, I set a reminder and alarms for task I need to do and I use the calendars apps to keep track of dates.

✓ For example, I set reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I use calendar apps to keep track of dates.

多處問題：複數一致（reminders, alarms, tasks）；“for task I need to do”需加複數並在定語前加冠詞或使用複數；“calendars apps”語序錯誤，應為“calendar apps”或“calendar applications”。建議注意主謂賓一致與名詞單複數以及名詞複合詞的正確順序。

× It's very helpful for me.

✓ It's very helpful for me.

句子語法正確，可保留原句。說明：形容詞“helpful”用法正確，副詞“very”修飾恰當。