Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答比较直接，但有语法、拼写和表达细节可改进。应在主题句后用一两句具体说明记忆技巧或举例，并用连接词使表达更自然。注意单复数及冠词，用更地道词汇替换重复词汇。

例: Yes, I’m fairly good at remembering things. For example, I always remember my friends’ birthdays because I keep them in a calendar app and set reminders, so I never miss sending a message on the day.

提案: 答案有内容但语法时态、词汇和句子完整性有问题，最后句子不完整。应使用过去时描述经历，补充细节并用连接词说明结果或感受。避免不完整的句子。

例: Yes, I once forgot my bank card when I went to withdraw money. I had to go back home to get it, which wasted a lot of time and made me feel quite embarrassed.

提案: 回答内容清楚但表达不够流畅，有语法和连贯性问题。应用更自然的表达说明疾病和具体要做的事情，并使用连接词解释原因或频率。注意句子完整性。

例: I have a chronic eye condition that requires long-term treatment, so I need to remember to take my medication every morning to prevent my symptoms from getting worse.

提案: 方法说明明确，但句子衔接略显生硬，语法需调整（单复数、时态和冠词），可提供更多具体细节例如常用应用或习惯，使用连接词使叙述更连贯。

例: I usually write important tasks in a notebook or use reminder apps like Google Calendar. That way, a notification pops up on the day, and I won’t forget important appointments.

× I can remember all my friend's birthday and send a message to them that day.

✓ I can remember all my friends' birthdays and send a message to them that day.

原句中friend's和birthday应为复数。句意为记得所有朋友的生日，所以friend应为复数friends，且所有格放在复数后为friends'；birthday也应为复数birthdays。建议：当表示“所有朋友的若干生日”时，用复数形式并正确使用所有格。

× Yes, once I need to withdraw some money from the bank, but I forgot the bank card at home so I had to return to get it. It wasted a lot of.

✓ Yes, once I needed to withdraw some money from the bank, but I forgot the bank card at home, so I had to return to get it. It wasted a lot of time.

句子中描述的是过去发生的事件，主句应使用过去式needed，而原句用现在时need不符合时态一致性。另句尾’It wasted a lot of.’缺少宾语，常用搭配是'a lot of time'。建议：叙述过去事件时保持全句过去时，并补全常用名词短语作为宾语。

× I have eye disease and need a long term treatment so. I need to remember to take medicine every morning.

✓ I have an eye disease and need long-term treatment, so I need to remember to take medicine every morning.

原句在结构和冠词上有问题：‘eye disease’前需不定冠词an，表示某种疾病；‘long term’应连字符为long-term作形容词；连接词so位置和标点不当，导致句子不完整。建议：使用正确冠词，形容词连字符，并将因果句合并成完整句。

× I usually write the important things down on my notebook or use some apps. So a notification will pop up when the day arrive.

✓ I usually write the important things down in my notebook or use some apps, so a notification will pop up when the day arrives.

两处问题：第一，介词错误（见下条），这里把on改为in以符合常用搭配（见下）；第二，动词arrive需与主语the day一致，使用第三人称单数arrives。此外，write down ... in my notebook是固定搭配。建议：使用固定搭配'in my notebook'并在简单现在时中对第三人称单数动词加-s。

× I usually write the important things down on my notebook or use some apps.

✓ I usually write the important things down in my notebook or use some apps.

英语中常用固定搭配为'write ... in a notebook'，而不是'on my notebook'。因此应使用介词in。建议：记住常见名词搭配的介词，例如'in a book/notebook'。