Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误。需要先给出直接的主题句，然后用一到两句具体支持理由，避免重复和无意义片段。注意动词时态和名词形式的正确使用，例如用"good at remembering"而不是"good at memories"。可使用连接词如"because"或"so"来组织细节。

例: Yes, I am quite good at remembering things. For example, I usually recall appointments and deadlines without notes because I use mental routines and repetition. This helps me stay organised and avoid missing important tasks.

提案: 回答意思大体明白但表达混乱且词语使用不当。应先简洁回答然后具体说明事件经过与结果，使用正确词汇（如"card"而非"cart"）并使用连接词如"so"或"which"来说明后果。

例: Yes, once I forgot my bank card when I went to the bank. I realised this after I left, so I had to go back to the bank to retrieve it, which was quite embarrassing.

提案: 回答基本清楚但语法和表达需改进。先给出主题句，然后用具体细节说明（比如药物种类、时间、提醒方式）。注意时态一致性和词语搭配，如"long-term treatment"，"take medicine every morning"等。可以使用连接词如"because"或"so"来解释原因。

例: I need to remember to take medication every morning because I have a chronic eye condition under long-term treatment. I usually set a daily alarm and keep my medicine next to my toothbrush to make it easier to remember.

提案: 回答清晰但略显简短和断裂。建议先给主题句，然后具体说明使用哪些工具和方法（例如日历、提醒、例子），并用连接词使句子更连贯。避免句子碎片。

例: I usually write important tasks in a notebook and also use reminder apps on my phone. For example, I set calendar alerts for appointments and use a to-do app for deadlines, so I rarely miss anything important.

× Yes, I'm really good at memories since and.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorising things.

句子结构混乱，单词使用错误（memories 用法不当），且有多余词。应使用动名词短语'memorising things'表示擅长记忆。建议简化句子，保持主系表结构。

× I have good.

✓ I have a good memory.

原句不完整，缺少名词或补语。应使用固定搭配'a good memory'表示记忆力好。建议使用完整名词短语作谓语的补充。

× I got good good points in the.

✓ I got good marks in the test.

原句结构不完整并且重复单词（good good），缺少名词'test'或科目。用'marks'或'scores'并补全对象。建议避免重复并明确所指的考试或科目。

× Yes, once I went to the bank to call some money I forgot my.

✓ Yes, once I went to the bank to collect some money, but I forgot my wallet.

句子不完整且用词错误（call some money 不自然），缺少宾语。应使用'collect'或'withdraw'表示取钱，并补上宾语'wallet'。建议分句用逗号或连词连接，补足缺失成分。

× Cart in my thumb so I had to return to get it.

✓ My card was in my bag, so I had to return to get it.

原句中的'cart in my thumb'不符合英语表达，可能是想说卡在包里（card in my bag）。同时缺少系动词。建议使用正确名词('card'/'wallet'/'bag')和介词短语('in my bag')，并加上连词或标点。

× I have a eye problem and need a long term treatment, so I need to remember that every day morning I had to eat some medicine.

✓ I have an eye problem and need long-term treatment, so I need to remember that every morning I have to take some medicine.

错误包括冠词使用（'a eye'应为'an eye'），复合形容词连字符('long-term')，以及时态和动词搭配不当（every day morning 不自然，应为'every morning'；'had to eat some medicine'应为'have to take medicine'）。建议注意冠词发音规则、形容词连词、固定搭配和正确的动词（take medicine）。

× I write down the important things in my notebook or use some apps in my mobile phone when they come. The notice.

✓ I write down important things in my notebook or use apps on my mobile phone when I need to remember them.

原句'when they come. The notice.' 表达不清。将'write down'与'use'并列使用时要保持宾语一致；'on my mobile phone'比'in my mobile phone'更常见；'when I need to remember them' 更清楚地说明触发条件。建议重组句子，保持动词形式一致并使用正确介词。