Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要时态一致、语法正确，并用更清晰的主题句和简洁的细节支持观点。可以先直接回答（Yes/No + 简短原因），然后用1-2个具体例子或对比说明变化。注意单复数、时态和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, I was better at memorising when I was a child, but my memory has declined slightly with age. For example, I could easily remember dates and phone numbers as a teenager, whereas now I often need to write things down to avoid forgetting them.

提案: 把句子整理成简单清晰的叙述，使用正确的时态和词语搭配（miss a flight, booked a flight, forgot）。先给出明确的结论，再说明原因和后果，最好补充细节（地点、时间、结果）。

例: Yes, I once missed a flight last year because I forgot that I had booked it. I only realised on the day of departure when I checked my email, so I had to buy a new ticket and I missed an important meeting.

提案: 回答要具体并与日常生活相关。用清楚的主题句说明你需要记住的事项，然后用1-2个具体例子说明频率和原因。避免模糊或拼写错误的短语（如'sums for caps'不明确）。

例: I need to remember daily tasks like studying English and checking my schedule. For instance, I try to practise speaking and review vocabulary for 20 minutes every day because regular practice improves my conversation skills.

提案: 回答要结构清晰，先给出方法（e.g. taking notes on phone），然后说明具体步骤和工具（which app, reminders, alarms）以及例子。注意冠词、动词形式和名词复数的一致性。

例: I usually use a note-taking app on my phone to remember important things. For example, I create a checklist in Google Keep and set reminders for deadlines, so I can review my notes whenever I need to.

× I think I'm quite good at memorising things when I was a child but getting older I think my memories has declined.

✓ I think I was quite good at memorising things when I was a child, but as I got older I think my memory has declined.

涉及主谓一致与时态混用问题：原句中先用现在时“I think I'm quite good... when I was a child”时态不一致；“memories has declined”主语与动词不一致（复数名词配单数动词）。建议将描述童年时的能力用过去时并将“memories”改为不可数名词“memory”，动词用现在完成时“has declined”表示从过去到现在的变化。

× I can only remember the things that happens and I don't remember the things happens maybe a years ago.

✓ I can only remember the things that happen now, and I don't remember things that happened maybe a year ago.

这是主谓一致与时态问题：1) “things that happens”中从句主语是复数“things”，动词应为复数形式“happen”。2) 第二部分描述过去应使用过去时“happened”。3) “a years ago”错误，应该是“a year ago”。建议注意主语是单数还是复数并匹配动词时态，表示过去的动作用过去时。

× I remember I miss a flight last year because of short memorisations and the airplanes I booked a years ago and I forgotten I have booked it.

✓ I remember I missed a flight last year because of poor memory: I booked the flight a year ago and I had forgotten that I had booked it.

过去时与过去完成时错误：1) 描述去年发生的事件应使用一般过去时“missed”。2) 要表达在过去某时间点之前已经发生的事情（先预订后忘记），需要过去完成时“had forgotten”与“had booked”。3) “short memorisations”和“airplanes”用词不当，改为“poor memory”和“flight/booked the flight”。建议根据时间先后关系选择过去时或过去完成时。

× I will remind myself to read sums for caps every day, at least 2A days because it helps a lot in my English conversation.

✓ I remind myself to read some cards every day, at least two days a week, because it helps a lot with my English conversation.

现在时与词汇、表达顺序问题：1) 如果这是习惯，应使用一般现在时“remind myself”。2) “read sums for caps”不通顺，猜测为“read some cards”或“read summaries”；已改为“read some cards”。3) “2A days”不是正确表达，改为“two days a week”。4) 搭配上用“helps a lot with my English conversation”。建议使用明确的短语并用一般现在时描述习惯。

× I usually like to take notes in my phone using a app's name not plus and it is very convenient for me to making notes and I just pick up my phone and I can re record everything I want.

✓ I usually take notes on my phone using an app called Notepad, and it is very convenient for me to make notes; I just pick up my phone and I can record everything I want again.

动词+ -ing 形式及冠词、用词问题：1) “using a app's name not plus”中冠词应为“an”，且表达不清，改为“an app called Notepad”。2) “for me to making notes”错误地使用了动名词，应为不定式或动词原形“to make notes”。3) “re record”连写为“record again”更自然。建议注意介词搭配（take notes on my phone）和动词形式（不定式或动名词的正确使用）。