Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'memorising things', 'a lot of information'). Keep it concise (≤5 sentences).

例: Not really. I struggle with memorising things because I have difficulty retaining a lot of information at once. For example, I often forget names or dates unless I write them down. Therefore, I rely on notes to help me remember important details.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and idioms (e.g., 'mixed up' is OK but clarify what was mixed up). Provide a specific detail about what happened and how you felt or what you learned, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I once missed an important work meeting because I mixed up the dates. I thought it was on Tuesday, but it was actually on Monday, so I couldn't attend and felt really embarrassed. Since then, I always double-check dates in my calendar.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and use correct word choices ('daily tasks' not 'parity task'). Give a specific example of tasks and explain why remembering them matters, using linking words like 'for example' and 'because'.

例: I need to remember my daily tasks, such as appointments, exercise and work deadlines. For example, I plan to study for an hour each evening because consistent practice helps me reach long-term goals like passing exams.

提案: Make the reply grammatically correct and concise: state your method, give one specific detail about how you use it, and mention a benefit. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I use my mobile phone to take notes and set reminders because it's convenient and I always have it with me. For instance, I use calendar alerts and short to-do lists so I don't forget deadlines.

× No, I am not good at memorizing thing.

✓ No, I am not good at memorizing things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural because it refers to general items or information in an uncountable/collective sense. Use 'things' for plural general reference. Suggestion: use plural nouns when talking about multiple items or unspecified items.'

× This is because I find it's very difficult and hard to remember all of information.

✓ This is because I find it very difficult to remember all of the information.

Redundant adjectives ('difficult and hard') are awkward; choose one. Also 'it's' is informal and 'all of information' is incorrect—'information' is uncountable and needs 'the' when referring to specific information. Suggestion: use 'it' not 'it's' and include 'the' before 'information.'

× Yes, I have forgotten about an important meeting because I got a ton mixed up and I cannot remember the date of the meeting, so I feel regret about that.

✓ Yes, I forgot an important meeting because I got a lot mixed up and could not remember the date of the meeting, so I regretted that.

When describing a past event, use past simple or past perfect consistently. 'Have forgotten about' is present perfect but the rest is past; better to use past simple 'forgot.' 'A ton mixed up' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'a lot mixed up' or 'was very confused.' 'Cannot' should be past 'could not.' 'Feel regret' should be past 'regretted.' Suggestion: keep past tense for completed past events and use appropriate expressions (e.g., 'I forgot'/'I was confused').

× In daily life, I would like to remember about the parity task that I planned in each day.

✓ In daily life, I would like to remember the parity tasks that I planned each day.

Do not use 'remember about'; use 'remember' directly with the object. 'Parity task' may be intended as 'daily/priority task'—if 'parity' is wrong, replace with correct word. Also use plural 'tasks' if referring to repeated items and 'each day' not 'in each day.' Suggestion: remove 'about' after 'remember' and place time expressions correctly ('each day').

× This is because it helped me to achieve a long term goal.

✓ This is because it helps me to achieve long-term goals.

Tense should match general habitual statement: use present simple 'helps' for ongoing benefit. 'Long term' should be hyphenated as 'long-term' when used as an adjective and 'goals' plural is natural. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths and hyphenate compound adjectives.'

× Nowadays I use mobile phone for take note everything in my life.

✓ Nowadays I use my mobile phone to take notes of everything in my life.

Use 'my' before 'mobile phone.' Use infinitive 'to take' not 'for take.' 'Note' should be plural 'notes' when recording multiple items. Use 'take notes of' or simply 'take notes' without 'of.' Suggestion: say 'I use my mobile phone to take notes' or 'to note down everything.'

× This is because it's easy to look on it and easy to follow the text in each day.

✓ This is because it's easy to look at and easy to follow the text each day.

Use 'look at' not 'look on.' 'Follow the text in each day' is awkward; use 'each day' after the verb 'follow' or say 'daily.' Suggestion: use correct phrasal verbs ('look at') and place time expressions naturally ('each day' or 'daily').'