Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn trả lời ‘Yes’ hoặc ‘No’. (2) Sửa lỗi thì và cấu trúc (ví dụ: “I’m not good at memorising things, but I remember important events”). (3) Giảm lặp từ và dùng liên từ phù hợp như ‘but’ hoặc ‘however’. (4) Giữ độ dài dưới 4 câu. Ví dụ chi tiết: nêu rõ loại sự kiện bạn nhớ (sinh nhật, kỳ thi) và lý do ngắn gọn (vì cảm xúc liên quan).

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising facts, but I do remember important events. For example, I always recall family birthdays because they are emotional and I celebrate them every year.

提案: Bạn cần sửa ngữ pháp, dùng thì đúng và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng thì hoàn thành đúng: “I have forgotten” hoặc quá khứ đơn “I forgot”. (2) Nêu rõ điều đã quên (tên sự kiện, thời điểm) và lý do hoặc hậu quả ngắn gọn. (3) Sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc. (4) Tránh câu rối và quá dài. Ví dụ chi tiết: nêu bạn quên hội thảo nhập học, bạn đến muộn hoặc bỏ lỡ thông tin quan trọng).

例: Yes, I forgot an important freshman orientation at my university last year. I missed several announcements because I mixed up the date, so I had to catch up later by asking classmates for notes.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sắp xếp ý mạch lạc; loại bỏ thông tin không rõ. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề: nêu vài việc cần nhớ hàng ngày. (2) Liệt kê các nhiệm vụ cụ thể với liên từ như ‘and’ hoặc ‘also’. (3) Tránh cụm từ mơ hồ như “Up before 8:00 PM” nếu không rõ nghĩa; nếu bạn muốn nói ‘wake up before 8am’, hãy viết rõ. (4) Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (switch off lights, lock the door, take medicine).

例: I need to remember several daily tasks, such as switching off the lights and locking the door before leaving, and starting to cook dinner on time. I also try to wake up before 8:00 AM to prepare for work.

提案: Bạn nên nói rõ phương phá

× I don't think I'm a good person for memorising things, but I really good at memories in specific events that are important with me, are important to me.

✓ I don't think I'm good at memorising things, but I'm really good at remembering specific events that are important to me.

The sentence has several issues: missing verb 'am' before 'good' (linking verb required) and incorrect noun 'memories' instead of the gerund/verb 'remembering'. Also the phrase 'important with me' is wrong; correct preposition is 'to me'. Suggestion: use 'be' verb with adjectives (I am good), use 'remembering' for the action, and use 'important to me' for correct preposition use. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yes, I have forgot very important occasion in a mile university that that's occasion is for the freshmen of my faculty organize it.

✓ Yes, I forgot a very important occasion at a my university that was organized for the freshmen of my faculty.

The present perfect 'have forgot' is incorrect; the past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten' if using present perfect, but the simple past 'forgot' fits better here. The sentence also needs articles ('a'), correct preposition 'at' for location, and passive or reduced clause for 'was organized for the freshmen'. Suggestion: use correct past tense forms, include necessary articles, and restructure the clause for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I always need to remember to turn off all the lights in the house before going out and then cooking after. Up before 8:00 PM.

✓ I always need to remember to turn off all the lights in the house before going out and to turn off the cooker before 8:00 PM.

Original has confusing preposition and word order: 'then cooking after. Up before 8:00 PM' is ungrammatical. Use 'before' with time expressions and parallel structure 'remember to turn off X and to turn off Y'. Suggestion: make verbs parallel and place time expression after 'before'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I usually take note the important things or and umm, remind myself in the afternoon of that day.

✓ I usually take notes of important things or remind myself in the afternoon of that day.

Use plural 'take notes' (common collocation) and remove extra 'and'/'umm'. 'Take note' needs 'of' or better 'take notes of' for objects. Also 'remind myself in the afternoon of that day' is acceptable; ensure parallel structure when using 'or'. Suggestion: use set phrases like 'take notes' and keep parallel verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 8