Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Correct grammar (use 'remember' properly) and avoid redundancy.

例: Not really. I struggle to memorise things, but I can usually remember what’s essential for my daily tasks. For example, I write down important dates in my phone so I don’t forget them.

提案: Give a direct answer, then briefly describe one clear example and how you handled it. Use linking words (for example, so, but) and correct phrasing (e.g., 'I have experienced forgetting important things'). Avoid vague phrases.

例: Yes, I have. For example, I once forgot an important meeting, so I immediately apologised and rescheduled. Since then, I set multiple reminders on my phone to avoid the same mistake.

提案: Answer directly with a topic sentence naming specific items, then add one detail using a linking word. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and be specific about 'work-related tasks'.

例: Mostly I need to remember work-related tasks, such as deadlines and meetings. I also try to remember personal things like grocery lists and appointments, so I plan my day each morning.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence about your main method, then add one specific example of a technique and a linking word to show how it helps. Use present simple for routines.

例: I use reminders and repetition to remember important things. For example, I set alarms and check my to-do list several times a day, which helps me stay organised and avoid forgetting tasks.

× No, I'm not, but I basically could remember what I need remember.

✓ No, I'm not, but I can basically remember what I need to remember.

The original sentence uses 'could' incorrectly for present ability and omits 'to' before the second 'remember'. This is a modal verb usage and verb form issue. Use 'can' to express current ability (present modal) and include the full infinitive or base form phrase 'remember what I need to remember'. Also move 'basically' before the verb for natural word order. Grammar problem type ID:4

× Yes I have. I have a lot of experience for getting something important for me, but I always try to overcome like that situation.

✓ Yes, I have. I have often had the experience of forgetting something important to me, but I always try to overcome that kind of situation.

Errors include incorrect preposition ('experience for' should be 'experience of'), incorrect verb form and meaning ('getting' is wrong; 'forgetting' fits context), awkward phrase 'for me' (use 'to me'), and unnatural expression 'like that situation' (use 'that kind of situation'). Also use present perfect 'have had' or 'have often had' to indicate past experiences relevant now. This maps to past tense/present perfect and preposition/verb form issues. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I have a lot of things to remember, but especially I need to remember, uh, is that, uh, the thing related to the work?

✓ I have a lot of things to remember, especially things related to my work.

Original has awkward structure and unnecessary filler words; 'especially I need to remember, is that, the thing related to the work?' is ungrammatical. Simplify to 'especially things related to my work'. Use 'my work' rather than 'the work' and remove the question mark because this is an answer. This is a sentence structure and article/pronoun issue. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I would check it repeatedly when I need to remember something.

✓ I check things repeatedly when I need to remember something.

Using 'would' here is inappropriate; it suggests habitual past action or conditional. The speaker is describing a present habit, so use simple present 'I check'. Also replace 'it' with 'things' for clarity. This is a modal verb usage and present tense issue. Grammar problem type ID:4