Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答题时要注意语法、发音和用词准确性，避免重复与模糊表达。可以用一到两句直接回答，然后用一两句举例或说明方法，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。例如“key point”而不是“kit point”，并注意单复数和动词形式。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I usually pick a single key point to link with an event, which helps me recall details easily. For example, for birthdays I remember the cake flavour as the cue.

提案: 答案语法错误较多且含义不清，需要把句子组织得更自然并补充具体细节。避免时态混用（如“always forgot”应为“always forget”或“have forgotten”），修正词汇错误（“can't into my house”应为“can't get into my house”），并说明一次具体经历或改进措施。

例: Yes, I often forget my keys and sometimes I can't get into my house. Once I had to wait outside for an hour until my neighbour came home, so now I always leave a spare key with a trusted friend.

提案: 回答较直接但需用更准确自然的表达并增加具体细节。合并重复部分，使用连接词如“so”或“for example”来提升连贯性，并用更恰当的词组（如“use an app”而非“use a app”）。可以举出常用的应用名称或具体记录内容。

例: I usually use notes or a smartphone app to remember daily tasks, so I set reminders for appointments and shopping lists. For example, I use Google Keep to jot down ideas and set alarms for important events.

提案: 观点明确但表达需要更地道、精简并修正词汇和语法（如“funerals”复数用法是否合适，‘more easy’应为‘more easily’）。避免语气词“uh”并用连接词如“for example”来组织句子，可补充具体的记忆策略。

例: I usually identify one key detail to associate with an important event, which helps me remember the rest. For example, for a wedding I focus on the date and venue as my cues, and for appointments I visualise the person I will meet.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing thing.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things.

此句中名词“thing”应为复数“things”，因为在泛指能力或习惯时通常使用复数形式，表示能记住多件事物。建议在表达泛指时将可数名词用复数。

× That is because I can use a kit point to remember the special or important event.

✓ That is because I can use a key point to remember special or important events.

句中“kit point”应为“key point”（词汇错误已经修正）；同时“event”应使用复数“events”，因前文泛指多种重要事件。保持名词与泛指语境一致。

× Yes, I always forgot my key, so I can't into my house.

✓ Yes, I always forget my key, so I can't get into my house.

原句使用“always forgot”为过去时，与习惯性动作不符，应使用一般现在时“always forget”。另外“can't into my house”缺少动词，应为“can't get into my house”。建议表示经常发生的事情用一般现在时，并保证动词完整。

× I think it is really serious problem.

✓ I think it is a really serious problem.

句中缺少不定冠词“a”，应为“a problem”。虽然不在列单独，但属于可数名词前的冠词用法，按清单归为单数复数相关问题，需加冠词以使句子完整。

× If I don't have a kid, I can not do anything.

✓ If I don't have a key, I cannot do anything.

原句中的“kid”明显为拼写错误，应为“key”（钥匙）。此外“can not”通常写作“cannot”。根据上下文指忘钥匙导致无法进入，故改为“key”。

× I always use a note or use a app.

✓ I always use a note or use an app.

在英语中，表示以元音音素开头的可数名词前要用不定冠词“an”，因此“a app”应改为“an app”。

× In my country we have a cutting edge technology so I can use our artificial intelligence to make a note.

✓ In my country we have cutting-edge technology so I can use artificial intelligence to make notes.

“a cutting edge technology”中“technology”作为不可数或泛指时不需不定冠词，且“cutting-edge”需连字符。代词“our artificial intelligence”在此语境多余，改为泛指“artificial intelligence”。“make a note”指一般记录时可改为复数“make notes”。建议根据不可数名词和惯用表达调整冠词与复数形式。

× I always find a key point to remember the important things such as a wedding ceremony and a funerals.

✓ I always find a key point to remember important things such as a wedding ceremony and a funeral.

原句“a funerals”混用了单数冠词和复数名词，应改为单数“a funeral”。同时“the important things”可简化为“important things”更自然。保持名词与冠词一致。

× I think if people use a key point or vital event to remember things they will uh, remember more easy.

✓ I think if people use a key point or a vital event to remember things, they will remember more easily.

“remember more easy”中“easy”是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词“easily”。此外加入逗号并去掉口语填充词“uh”，并在“vital event”前加不定冠词“a”。建议用副词形式修饰动词，句子更通顺。